This was great! I can't wait to see what Amy and Martha get up to next!

It was an excellent stores. I like your writing style it was smooth and natural. Thanks for a great story.

JJ

AMAZING! Please write more Martha!

Good story. I liked it. Good job.

I think it's so sweet of Carlisle that he wanted to go to the sale for them ... but they blew it :-(
Well, at least the rest of the family gets to have some new clothes!
Great story, keep 'em coming!

I think it was great. Enjoyed every bit of it. Do some more!

wow loved it thanks keep up the great work on all of your stories thanks

loved it thanks and they do need to get there bottoms roasted and all so need to be grounded too

i would not want to be Amy or Martha when there dad gets a hold of there behinds great story so far thanks

Okay, that lie ... wasn't very good, haha!
It's not looking good for the two shopping queens ... great chapter!

Great chapter. I loved the lovely interaction between Carlisle and the girls.

Oh boy! I loved the tension in this chapter. Those girls should of known better than to lie.

Great chapter. The girls should of known that they could not get by with something like skipping girls. I would hate to those two girls right not.

Good story.

O.O
They're screwed.
Are they good at lying? I hope they are, I really do ...