Hello! very long ago I read the first cahpter and found it good; but I must have missed all updates since then.
My loss, I have to say, as this is a very interesting story! Thanks for sharing it, p

Thanks for updating, I really like this story.

I have read the whole 11 chapters in one sitting. This is a very interesting story. There should really be a "Susan After Narnia" story in the canon. Thanks for making this. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please continue.

Is any more of this story coming? I would like to read more. Like so many others, I would love to see a redemption and reunion eventually for Susan with Aslan and her family...

narnia reboot he got a little cottage and rented his big house. later susan may of got it back
at the moment i am listening to a bbc dramatized version its very good talking gatos (cats) are also good :)

plz rite mre
sorry mi riting suks

I would love to see this story continued.

I have always found the ending of the Susan story to be the most unsatisfactory part of all of the Narnia story line. She is horrifically excluded (even "damned") for rather petty and what seemed to be rigidly dogmatic reasons - when Edmond had done far, far worse and been well forgiven, even at great cost to Aslan. (Edmond was not the only one extended great mercy and forgiveness. Lots of others got it, but not Susan.)

It seemed so preachy and chauvenistic, and oddly cruel and anti-female. This mght address the wrong done to her.

I knew the name Tobermory as a Narnian cat name came to me from somewhere. It was your story. I've used the name in my fan fic called The Gryphon, the River and the Wildcat. There was also a Saki (H.N. Munro) story about a ginger Tom with the same name, which may also have been a source of inspiration...

Just found this story and glad to see Susan has a chance to believe again. Well written with familiar characters turning up. Hope to see more (and less of Eric)

exciting adventure

well this is interesting

I hope to see where this is going soon

Susan never believed in narnia in the last battle... and kirk's house was destroyed

Enjoyed the lastest chapter. I must admit that I don't remember dufflepuds from the Narnia series but I love the idea of another marshwiggle. Please continue with the story.

Hmm. Dragonets, Princess Ixania and Queen Hiformre. The plot thickens. More please.

Hum as I said looks like Susan was right not to trust Eric. But he has now stepped into dangerous territory and now going to have to deal with more than a Queen and 2 cats. Trust him to think a gun will solve his problems wonders how long before he realise that might (A gun) is not always right. Unlike Susan who does know.