Oh my gosh I loved this more than I should, especially since I can't see Haruhi and Mori having an affair behind Tamaki's back... But omg I loved this.

Fucking love it! Lol messed up about cheating but totally makes for a great story. Another good one

This was a cute story...

I ship them, though same can be said for her and Kyoya.

Ahaha, kinda wish this wasn't a oneshot.

Like most of your stories, I wish you would have continued them, as there is quit a bit of potential for a decent plot. TakaHaru and KyoHaru are my top two pairs for the fandom, and I somewhat like the way you've written this to a degree that before the ending I could insert either character in the unknown males place slightly OOC as it would be given the two male characters based on the show adaptation.

Yeah, yeah, I know that's cheating's not something either of them would really do, but, dammit, I just don't care. That. Was. Awesome. The thought of the Wild Type earning that name... yes, please!

On an actual critical level, I loved your abbreviated style. It really heightened the sense of passion and their need for one another. It also left a wonderful element of mystery, like we were a blindfolded third party the whole time. Yummy food for thought there! I would have liked the ending and the reveal to be a little less "forced" in the coat removal, and I really would have reveled in Haruhi's reaction to hearing his last words, but I think that's because I didn't want this precious little oneshot to end.

Let me just remind you that now is the perfect time to reread/rewatch Ouran and get some more fodder for your muses. Write more Mori/Haru! It's like a deadzone on for it these days.

Mmm yeah... this could definitely could have been made into a full out story. Great one-shot. I'm not one for infidelity, but I could probably get behind this (were it turned into a longer story) if the initial reasons for marriage were something like if they dated and they just settled and stayed because it was just something familiar and the marriage was recent.

Anyway, despite this, I really liked it... especially since it had my favorite Mori/Haru pairing. Those two are just *AUGH!* /mind melting lol

Whooo! Hot d mn! I'm done doe! It's too much, I'm gone. Please make another one of these.

I knew it!

Loved the ending. I actually thought it was going to be Kyoya

when I realized that Mori is the man back go her office, I was like :O

BTW! great story! write more! :)

oooooo Takashi has a girlfriend and I can't believe they did that .

Wow, I really like it

...oh snap

I think this is really good one-shot and would probably be an even better story :) I hope you continue this :)