Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

I don't care how old this story is, it is one of the greatest Star Wars fan fiction about the Skywalker's that I have ever read, it was a rewarding experience having read this, thank you for having written this story Sir/Madam ! :D

"It's a trap!" Lol

You know what's ironic? If Padme hadn't spearheaded the anti-military creation proposals, then the clone army probably would not have been accepted beyond the clones that had already been made. No more would have been produced because the Republic would already have a military by the time the Clone Wars came around. Or if she had lead proposals to phase out clone creation in preference of recruitment due to morality and cost. Clones are guaranteed to be more expensive. It's like an army of people whom you paid for the artificial insemination and surrogate mothering of, paid for their education, food, clothing, shelter, siblings, training, equipment, vehicles, etc. throughout their entire lives. Compared to only having to pay for recruits' training, equipment, and vehicles after they join your military.

So, in other words, if Padme had followed common sense on the military creation (because lack of a Republic military helped her planet SO MUCH against the Trade Federation and there are countless pirates plaguing the Republic) OR if she ahd followed her conscience on the subject of clone soldiers, Palpatine wouldn't have been able to execute Order 66 and the Jedi would have had support in bringing him to justice.

Yeah, given the consequences her idiocy and stubborn, baseless self-righteousness had for the galaxy, she did kind of get what she deserved. Her children didn't deserve it, though.

THIS WAS REALLY GREAT STORY! SEQUAL BETTER BE GOOD!

C-3PO... Damn...

Three Jedis vs 100 Stormtroopers... Jedis Win 100% Sure. XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD

Great Story.

Rest in Peace great Commandos.

This is Getting Really Really Interesting.

Well This Will get Really interesting.

Mara Jade is There, Vader is There and And Soon Wil Luke and Leia too. Hoåpefully you aren't planning kill jade.

well... This is Rather Interesting Story. Plz Update as soon as Possible.

Poor Jar Jar, Heros Death.

I Wonder what Happend him In real Star Wars Universe.

Uhh...you do know that her first name is Padme, not Amidala, right?

Other than that, you have a well-rounded story that is both interesting it makes you want to read more.

Good job, and I loved the story.

~Aubrey

hey great chapter i hope leia and luke and vader stop jade from killing both leia and luke and vader or anakin wife from getting kill update soon great chapter

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great story

One of the best Star Wars time travel stories I've read!

I am just reviewing this chapter because apparently I had forgotten to do so before as I was reading this story. I believe that you should have as many reviews as possible for this story and I am just trying to do my part. By the by, I loved Jakked's character.