Reviews for If I Could Be Alayne
laurapal chapter 1 . 1/29/2019
I was a bit apprehensive. I've long lost my taste for sex worker stories but I am glad I gave this a chance. Def. a fave for me.
Lairenna chapter 1 . 3/13/2018
This was pretty fantastic. I loved it!
andjelija.nenic chapter 1 . 3/10/2016
Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$
claire-loves-music chapter 1 . 1/4/2015
Wow i think i have a new ship. This was beautfully written. Sweet but sad at the end. I wish you would contuinue it where they meet again and maybe his wife dies. You touched on his reaction to finding out her real identity but it feels like more needs to be told like. I hope you will write a second part...
C Elise chapter 1 . 12/3/2014
very great story !
The Lady Stark chapter 1 . 4/20/2014
this is incredibly beautiful!
Anise Nalci chapter 1 . 4/14/2014
This was amazing, darn it! How you play with my heartstrings! :(

(I loved it.)
alejandra chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
Muy bueno me encanto
tsevca chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
i like it. at the end, before sansa left, it was little too sentimental for me but yeah. only watch out the details. in that you make many mistakes.
big deal about woman being the "boss" of a brothel... in real history, men used to be rare. and in this, the best brothel in the capital city is owned by a woman.
bastard origin is always mentioned and never questioned. the "lady baelish, not lady baelish" had no point.
when said only "seven", its always meant as the faith of the seven, never the seven kingdoms.
"Do you ever consider returning to the Riverlands and your father's people?" what that means? littlefinger is from the vale. he was made the lord paramount of the riverlands, but he was never there. he would never be welcomed there. if varys is in aegons service, he had told him.
"from the Wall to Essos" - since essos is in the east from the westeros, you wouldnt even get close to dorne, where arianne is from, to travel there. its road frpm north to the east, so it has no sense.
sansa did love joffrey.
house tully helps boltons along with northern bannermen? house tully consists of edmure, his wife and possibly their child. why would edmure help the murderer of his sister and nephew? and except lady dustin, no northern house wants to swear fielty to boltons. they were all forced, because freys and crown had their relatives and the king holds the whole power in this moment and makes them if they dont want to lose everything. despite that, half of them already plans to overthrow them, few months after they got the north. sansa being in the kings landing couldnt change that.
she was twice at court. varys had his reasons to keep it a secret, but there is no other person that could recognize sansa? she was supposed to be their future queen for a year and she didnt even coloured her hair like in books.

but those things werent that important in your story. and to sansa being changed. not much. yes, she isnt very good at numbers and i think shes the only character that will actually have sex for the first time on her wedding night, martins weird thing. other than that, its exactly how shed end up after few years with littlefinger.
User ID 4762246 chapter 1 . 7/8/2013
Brilliant! Love Sansa's Machiavellian mind in this fic!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/11/2013
Wow, that was amazing. I loved it! Please do more, there's still such hope for a happy ending!
Isis Feist chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
great
monie34 chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
You should do a part 2 to this story! Your a really good writer
livinglifeasitis chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
Never forgiving you for getting me into this lovely, lovely, lovely crack!ship. I will forever spend my time waiting and wanting more.

Every word (even the happy ones) just exuded angst and heartbreak. I loved it.

-Jen
AvalonTheLadyKiller chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
What a beautiful story. It gave me a new light to shed on Sansa. She has long been overshadowed by the vibrant Arya, who I respond the most to in the series. There was a curious notion with the Hound, for a while where she gained my attention. This is the story, though somber, I wish she had been able to experience.

The way you portrayed her, if slightly OC in parts, only helped her win my affection. Aegon's character was an interesting coupling, that I thoroughly enjoyed. These short passages can sometimes evoke more emotion then 20 chapters. You surely showed the reader a new twist on tale & I greatly delighted in this bit of light reading.

You have really shined here, & I sincerely hope you feel flattered. As a FF addict, I can proudly say, you have achieved more here than 50 other stories (if not more). It's stories like this that, though don't have 10k reviews, they deserve more credibility than you receive. Fabulous work, you have stunned me with this small wonder.
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