raven saying to garfield you are mine

That was beautiful! I loved that so much that I nearly cried with happiness. I felt like I was her while reading that because I could feel what she was feeling by the way you explained how she thought. I was wanted to let you know that this story was amazing and that u are an excellent writer. Keep writing :)

That was brilliant. It's an excellent character study! Great job.

OH ... my.

This goes immediately to Favorites.

Your style is almost sparse while being beautifully expressive. Truly a pleasure to read.

Damn. And you're only 17?

Can we, maybe, clone you or something?

awesome. great. serious warm fuzzies

ILOVEIT! GREAT WORK!

Absolutely wonderful and endearing! Keep up the awesome writing!

It's official. You're on my list of authors. This was so gratifying to read and so well-written. You've always had beautiful word usage and choice. I think you've outdone yourself here. I hope you are well and I hope to read more from you soon. Keep rockin

Love it!

I loved it. :)

This story deserves more than one review.

I like how you portrayed Raven's inner turmoil and how he knows her better than the others do.

I love this. You really captured what you were going for, felt like I was really in Raven's mind. Great story.