i am crying this was so beautiful hold me jesus

i was afraid that the story have a sad ending, but... it's great and cute and perfect!

Loved this story and your other suits story, you write the characters as they are in the series and I could imagine this happening in the show, your an amazing writer, please do more suits stories

Oh god! That was so amazing! It's perfect! So heartbreaking, but beautiful and intese... I just love it )

So, overall I thought this was lovely, the ideas, the imagery, the plot. Fantastic. I loved the vulnerability Donna showed here, it's not something we see on the show (almost to the point that I would think this scenario ought to be out of character), but honestly seeing her like this just made her character more of a real person. So thanks for that, and kudos because that's not an easy scenario to write for them without it being cliché.

There were a few silly grammar errors. The funny thing was that they were pretty obvious (at least to me) non-native speaker errors, which are 100% forgivable imho. They were just silly, nit-picky things, but ones that a native just wouldn't make; wrong preposition choice was probably the most common. Which that's a bitch to get correct writing in a foreign language. Total respect though, I've studied two foreign languages pretty extensively, and I can completely understand how challenging it is to write at length in them. Anyhow, you should keep writing, 'cause this was great.