This is pretty funny, and the fact that the sprits are his actual friends makes it even better. Hopefully you come back to this fix.

It's too bad you don't write anymore, this is a really great story, i was laughing so much.

does naruto didn't learn anything regarding background story ?
he immortal, he have time to learn anything. he still got flustered easily.. c'mon for 2000years old man, he still like a boys..

I am looking forward to chapter 9 and I hope Naruto gains mark of crimson dragon.

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So does that mean the cannon happened between the 2000 years (Naruto/Hinata family) and is dating Mie spirit card now or there was a change from cannon

PLEASE COUTINUE THIS STORY!

awesome deck

Okay, this is a good one. It kinda got me really interested in watching yugiyoh again, and the attitude of naruto in this story made it easier to relate to the naruto in the anime/manga.

Alright, so I'm curious about which direction you gonna take this fic?

love this story, the reactions to narutos arguments and relationship with his cards are hilarious to watch. nice idea making dark magician girl his daughter

Don't know this fandom too well, but based on a brief skim through over all the chapters, I thought I'd share my two cents on the matter.

Inconsistent chapter lengths. This has always bothered me greatly. Sometimes it's unavoidable, but I find chapters that have a big jump in length (or suddenly drop) are off-putting to read.

I'd suggest adding a bit more to the dialogue tags to give the characters more life, but I just like big chunky paragraphs. A few technical errors in a few places, but nothing disruptive. Can't comment on characters and the plot since I'm not familiar with fandoms, but it seems all right.

~Aquila

XD Kakashi and Anko lol interesting... well not gonna pretend I have a clue what the fuck is going on but I still enjoyed this chapter especially when Kakashi was summoned

Hahahahahhaha wtf lol why did Mei... did he just... lol "Have a nice flight!" XDD

definitely need to do something for shippuden

I could see where u got tired some minor spelling mistakes started popping up around when naruto finally get to the dorm and speaks with alexis.
Also there seems to be a turn missing for alexis right after kakashi pulls out of the duel that first time.
Mana is Naruto daughter. Damn nice didn't see anything of that sort coming considering naruto does look like a teenager. The clothing change just raises questions nothing big just wondering what's wrong with the uniform? Is that his canals ir does he wear that to class? Cause if he did I could see many many mysterious dissaperences in the academy's future.