this is just amazing! i loved every sentence it was just beautiful

Good story- was a refreshingly different plot from what else is on ff (of what I have seen, that is). Only thing, would liked to have seen Donny's pov a little more. But what you did here is great stuff! Any chance for a sequel?

Ah, so it looks like Bishop is going to use Donatello to help him with his plight. Interesting concept for sure, and I'm eager to see where this goes. I'll read more when I get the time. Nicely done on this.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

Ffff, I am glad I ran into you.l So many interesting stories. I'd love to see another multichaptered something from you

Leo is finally rescued and Bishop will seek revenge against Donnie for made him drink pee.

Good ending.

Great job on the story, I liked it alot, keep up the great work and keep on writing.

The ending was a mixture of awesomness and romance. I loved it.
Seriously! You gotta make a sequel with Mikey and Raph! Leo and Donnie are just soooo sweet together. Definitely one of the best fics I've ever read. Keep doing what you do.

I really liked the imagery of floodgates on Raph's pent up emotions!

And Don's last compound was perfect! I like how you did that segway (?) from one scene to another right in the middle, made it way more funny. A lot of my favorite movies do scenes like that, too, now that I think about it...

Great story, loved it!

Well, just got to read through this all, and it definitely seems like something Bishop would pull. Each chapter just left me tenser and more worried, and jab at the end... thansk for writing this! _

My god! That was an awesome chapter! Perfect way to end this and wrap everything up!

Your fanfic had all the element of a good story! Suspense, drama, humor, epicness, supernatual situations,romance, brotherly love, smooth dialogues, evil mastermind plots, action and a breathtaking escape from the whole situation! Brilliant job with it!

I absolutely loved how you captured each and every character. You made me fall in love with the turtles all over again and that's amazing! I can totally understand Bishop's fascination with them, which shows more in the dialogues with Leo. Even an enemy can't ignore their awesomeness! And under hard situations like this one he put them through it increases tenfold! Haha i feel like fanfictions should be written outta this fanfiction!
LoooL Bishop's line about bondage made me laugh so hard! XD

Really, really, reaaally enjoyed it! Thank you for sharing, you're a lovely writer.

p.s Any chance for a sequel and Bishop's (try) for revenge?Though the story is pretty much complete as it is :P, but it's still really hard for me to let it go. :(

Oh no!Where Leo's light gone?

aaarg! what a cliffhanger! ohmygosh i'm so tense right now. can't wait to see what a happens next! XD

Great job on the story so far, I liked it alot, please keep
going and update real, real, real, soon thanks.

Oh no! Where's Leo gone?! Update soon! (Guess this isn't gonna be one of those stories where all the turtles are fond of each other? ..I like those sort of slashes best. They just work better that way in my opinion if it's slashed at all...)

Ooo, I like how things seem to be going! I particularly like how you've written Raph as a smart ninja, and not a dumb brawler. I love the 'holier than thou' line! That would be just the attitude that would get to him and I could definitely see Leo having one sometimes!