You should continue making this. You are sooo good. This is an amazing story!

Thought I'd make your day better ;) I'm nice like that. Damn good story my friend, a good spin on the eight pages. I never really thought of why the stupid people would climb the fence in the first place but this was a good take on it. I liked your style of writing, it was good. There wasn't a lot of mistakes and you had good descriptive writing that really made it creepy to just read. I don't wanna know how it feels to be the poor girl now stuck with Mr Needs-To-Eat-A-Sandwich

I feel sorry for her, very much. I'm almost scared to ask what Slender did to her... I mean possibilities are endless so I'd rather not think about it.

Got to say though, I loved the little song at the end. It's become my theme song now. Been decided.

Taila x

Sorry to be not picky, but Thomasville Carolina is a real town, props for that. And there is what appears to be Forrest nearby, (from google maps aerial view) but here is where you messed up: Not checking if it was a real town. Of the 2010 concensus it was much much larger than 2,666 or about that much. Quite a bit larger in fact at 26,757. AND has a university, the Davidson County Community College. On top of that the whole "I am from _ sleepy town" cliche is a cliche. An overused one at that. If you had checked the name before using it and then stuck with the legit city it would really show some impressive attention to detail and make for a nice touch to anyone who checks to see if the "town" was real.

You should continue this

Wow... That's really scary. I'm so gonna keep reading.

GREAT STORY! I wish i could wrote a slender fanfic, but i never had the guts to finish the game... -_- i keep playing it though

Sequel! Next chapter! Come ON!

Good little fic, shame it was so short but I suppose you can only do so much with such a short game. Maybe you could do a fic about slender the arrival? That one has alot more of a story to it. Anyway nice work it was a fun thing to read.

Not bad. It's hard to find good Slenderman fanfiction...Ridiculously hard, actually...

Nice atmosphere to the story, overall.

very clever, the way you have directed my attention to the review button...XP

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Props for getting them to put in a Slender category - this was awesome!

You had me trippin'...
I was so scared of what was going to happen, almost as if I were playing the actual game (which I played, like, once...) That's how scared of the game I am. But I still like Slender! I feel sorry for Cara though, I mean, she still got the eight pages but doesn't get to live...
That's so sad :(

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(reads end part) You really shouldn't have written that. By that I mean I hated the end. Other than that, it's good, so you can avoid my wrath. (Or is it Wraith? I lost a few brain cells when I drowned. Oh well.)