Hey, Cly! This book is fantastic! I really have loved and it is easily one of my favorite Peter Pan fics that I have ever read. Please continue it. I really want to see how you develop more of Peter's different abilities and his characters since J.M. Barrie doesn't really give a straight answer about how some of these came about. I love how you write the characters in this story and it is very well written. I am so happy that you have stuck with it through thick and thin. I do have a couple of questions, and this is not me poking at the book, I'm just curious if you were thinking of including these or not...
How, according to you, can Peter fly permanently? I know that you may be going to address this sooner than later so, don't feel like you have to answer that one if you are going to get to it in the story. :)
How does Peter get his panpipes/pan flute thing and how is he so good at it? I know that you have not mentioned it yet in the book so, I'm just curious of what you think. This book really is amazing. I could imagine all of these scenarios happening and I absolutely adore the addition of Cly. She brings a lot to the story and adds a lot as well. The Lost Boys...oh my goodness...you wrote them so well. They were hilarious and I loved how that was completely normal for things to be like the way they were. You also wrote Tinkerbell really well too. Your story and depictions of the characters had me laughing out loud multiple times. I also like the sweet moments between Peter and Cly. 10/10 for a multitude of reasons. Please never stop writing. Your work is phenomenal so, never give up on this story or any of your other ones.
Thanks for bringing something amazing to the Peter Pan fans of this world,
Aisling Kiley

Nearly fainted saw the update loved your storys thoight about doing more disney classic like marry poppins could be banks older sister dates burt

more pleaz

I love this story SOOO MUCH! It made me cry and laugh, it's awesome! What if someone has an amnesia or something like that? Just a suggestion

Nice fanfiction! I always like the ones that were made a couple of years ago, but are still updating, as it means that the writer is devoted and probably likes the franchise a lot!

Umm in this chapter you know at the beginning when you write guardian angle it's Angel not angle just thought you might want to know unless she is like a guardian 360 degrees which would be slightly weird but meh

LOL, I can't stop laughing! Love your story, please update soon!

Please update! I love your story!

Please post a chapter in the future time soon. I'm looking forward to one of those.
I must admit reading about their past experiences together is fun. I can't help but think it would be impractical to write to much in to it. Mostly because of the amount time it would be covering, to do that. You should just write those bits and pieces that help round out the main part of the story. That really is all that's required to help push the story forward.

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And now you do! XD Yes we shall x.x Can't say I have any suggestions . Just want to see these characters develop and see what plans Cly has for tricking Peter to fly back home XD That's pretty much it and I'm guessing that'll all come in due time so yep

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When you described the landscape, it made me think of Neverland and now I kind of want to watch Peter Pan again *sigh*

LOL Cly! "You have a long day of failure ahead of you" XDDDD Poor Peter but woohoo he's learning to fly! Which is a fun thought cause in my head, he's the boy who CAN fly, and who always could. Never really thought he had to learn to XD

Im a big fan of you fanfic and I hope to see more because I like your way of writing :)

Awe so cute see how they met and he learns to fly can not wait to see how the lost boys come to x welcome back missed this

Reply: Hihi! No worries hahaha I'm in college too so I totally get it x.x And once again, anytime :) Since it's Naruto after all :P XD

Review: LOL She IS like a mom XD But man, wonder how she's going to make him leave, especially since we all know he's not leaving XD Looking forward to the flying lessons xD All the best for all your exams and classes and stories!

Good luck on your science exam!

Welcome back missed this what's going to happen when she takes him to London he's so cute please don't be too long update soon