I have no words right now but I'll try to express myself anyway.
First, I must say that I almost gave this story up several times. Why, you ask? Because it needs serious editing.
But try as I have, I didn't. Why, you ask again? Because of the plot. Plot? Yes, it's an f*cking awesome story (at least so far, haha').
Well, with that outta the way, I'll tell you that this last chapter even made me cry! I'm developing a serious love-hate feeling for the OC. She is just so real! Sometimes it pisses me off (like her uselessness) but I agree/can see why you wrote as you have. I really love when people try to incorporate reality into something that would be way more fun as fantasy, cause let's be real here, being an awesome assassin as Connor for example is totally impossible (or at least very, very unlikely). Fact is, I really love the story and all in it that I read so far. Not only is it possible (concrete plot) but also cultured (miths and vocabulary and stuff). As I said, lots of grammar stuff that could (and should) be fixed but if people can get past that I would consider the best fic in this fandom (as I also said before, so far at least lol).
Hope you still read the reviews seeing as the story is complete cause I wanna tell ya to not stop writing, you have talent.

Why? Why bring back Luke? He is by far the least like-able character. In my opinion. I could give you a detailed list of the tortures I would love to inflict on him. Starting with cutting his lips off to get rid of that damn smile. Please, make him go away.

Ugh Luke is so disgusting. Kinda makes me want to stop reading this.

Luke said he owned a plantation and plantations need workers (typically slaves, in that time right?) so i imagine Luke is attempting to make her a slave for his family?

If she's mixed, why are you saying she has white skin?

Squeee! I can't believe the next chapter is the last (are you sure? ...you don't want to write another 100,000 words or so? lol). ;) I'm sure I'll say this again later, but this is so good, and I seriously hope you write more. Uduak's and Connor's story cannot be over so soon, 2 days, and several nights of staying up past 3 and I feel like I've just starting reading.
This is truly beautiful and honestly one the best AC3 fanfic on here. I'm not just saying that. I really really mean it. This fic has made me laugh, cry, angry and I cannot wait to read anymore you have on this. It makes me really sad that Ubisoft didn't give Connor a happy ending. He's such a well detailed character whose inner anguish is not easy to depict, and reading this, how you capture his character so well, from his speech patterns to his thoughts I was really amazed. To many people write him and he's totally OOC, a desperate love puppy or just really angry and a dick. The scene where he finds out he has a son, I almost burst out crying, it was so heartbreaking and lovely. I could totally see this as part of the story. And spoilers, they way they put it in Unity he dies a very horrible death. Reading this, even if its AU gives me hope.
I know a lot of people didn't like Uduak at first. But I must say I did. I am a sucker for character development and hers was done with leaps and bounds. She went from being utterly useless and annoying, into a woman that seemed almost born to love Connor. Their interactions were realistic and convincing. Uduak wasn't always nice to Connor, and he wasn't always nice to her. But hey that's how relationships work right? My boyfriend and I argue all the time, about stupid stuff, but at the end of the day we still love each other, and with Uduak and Connor I got that.
I know I must be rambling, but this fic as changed the way I read other fics on this fandom. Heck it's changed the way I play the game.
Beautiful well written story. I cannot wait to read more from you!
Yours truly,
OsakaAccent

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You are beautiful. I mean it. You have written a wonderful story, crossing in African culture and keeping things historically accurate. You write Connor very well which is difficult to do considering how short spoken he is. But this story is wonderful, engaging and excellent!

Ok i just want to say that this by far is the best AC3 I have ever had the pleasure of reading. I'm greatful on how well you kept Connor in character through these chapters. I also like the extra explanations u put under your chapters, they are great to help the reader get more into the story. Again I just 2 anted to say thank you.

Beautiful story. It's amazing how well you were able to capture everyone's patterns of speech. Especially Connor's. I for one, know how difficult it can be to do that. And keep them in character. Well done. It was a beautiful story that made me laugh, and cry. You are an amazing author. And I hope to buy your very own book in the future. (That isn't fanfiction. Agh I hope that doesn't sound rude. But I also hope that you know what I mean)

I'm kind sorta starting to like Luke. He's really hot in my mind. And he's cocky. He's cute in a way.

OH MY GOD
I sacrificed quite a lot of my sleep to finish this fic. Curse you. It's wonderful. Quite a bit of grammar mistakes but it doesn't matter, it's breathtaking and beautiful. Uduak is quite a character, I loved her even if she drove me crazy sometimes. Connor is perfectly written.
I was so worried by the end but it's all fine, phew!
Write a sequel one day please, great job!

Ok so I've been away for like a really long time taking care of my Grandparents with no interent and I checked my email today. (I must warn you, This isn't much of an review but I'll try anyway) I read your entire story all over again. it was amazing. There isn't a lot I can about it that i haven't said before. I am totally going to miss staying up late to read this after work. The end of the game was so sudden and felt incomplete, my own imagination wasn't good enough for me; after I read this, it was just Perfect, finally it had an ending (and a Fantastic ending it was!). You've managed to take the characters, and give them a world where everything makes sense. I liked the story plot and the adding of new characters. I liked the suspense, but i hated it too, cause I had to keep waiting (even if it was only for a few seconds). Although the inclusion of Gods and the Pieces of Eden confused me a little, ( I should have said something sooner). I loved how you were able to let Uduak and Connor be together, even through their relationship was not the happiest, in their situation it is the most realistic. I really cannot imagine Connor having anything
easy without having to suffer first.
This story was magnificent.I can't believe I found this whole thing by accident, I enjoy your writing a lot, I'm going to suggest my friends to read your fanfics, i think they'll really be fond of it. I look forward to reading more of your work. (So don't stop writing!) AND PLEASE make a sequel. I know a lot of sequels aren't popular, but I'll be reading and that's all that matters right? I really want to know what happens later on with Connor, Uduak and Ngozi!
Sorry for the long feedback, I just wanted to express how great this story was. (which it was!) It was marvelous, brilliant, wonderful, superb, spectacular, remarkable, well you get the point...

BRILLIANT!

omg, you kinda make me cry at the end x'( i love it!