Sweet! I cant wait to see this get updated. I love this story and I've been waiting to see more of it for a long time. This is really fantastic news!

I love this story and this ship! Can’t wait to see what happens next!

I love what you have done with this so far. I was a little iffy on how they would work as a couple, but with a little tinkering they would look cute together and this fic seems to prove that. This is an unusual pairing, which is something I also happen to enjoy on occasion. All in all this is a very fun read, and I hope it works out well.

Are you in the FMA Amino? I think I've seen an avatar like yours and was just wondering. :3c ?

plZ UPdate

I actually created an account for this website just because of this fanfic here. This chapter in particular is one of the most passionate chapters I've read and I think the way you described everything, the doubts, the feelings, was just wonderful and made for a very good chapter. Thank you for writing and I'm looking forward to reading more in the future!

Me encanta tu historia.
por favor continua... me muero por leer como reacciona mustang cuando se quede a solas con Winry.

me empieza a encantar esta pareja xD

just a small nitpick, but in the beginning of the chapter, shouldn't it be "complete 180" instead of 360? if it was 360, then the moment stays the same.

really, really excited for your future chapters btw

God, I'm so inspired and touched by your dedication to this fic! I loved it since I first found it a few years ago (this pairing will be my fav till I die) and it's awesome to see you update it like this.

Truly love this story! Your style of writing does keep me engaged into the story so much that I read it in one sitting. You have kept them both in character which is a challenge for some given erm . . The arrangement lol Roy making her flustered while he is cool as a cucumber is true to form. Can't wait to read more

Love it! Will be waiting ️

Ah Havoc I feel so bad for you.
Oh a starting romance how cute.
Smirked is appearing a little too often, try things like devilish smile or knowing grin.
Ah I kind of wish this was based in the Brotherhood universe, the fact that he killed her parents makes it a bit odd that he is sleeping with her. I didn't see any or perhaps don't remember them but if you are having trouble with proofing have an online text reader read the story back to you. That always helped me with my writing. I hadn't actually planned on reviewing at first but I saw your update was rather recently. I'm liking the idea and hope you continue. Till your next update take care.

It was almost romantic till that end scene now I just feel a bit disappointed. Great writing though
Empty sex hurts my heart.

He smirked and clapped, turning off the lights.
A disco ball lowers from the ceiling and creates shimmering reflections and fills the room with a dim dark pink lighting. 'Marvin Gaye - let's get it on' plays in the background.
Winry leaves the room and decides talking to Roy was a mistake.

IM GLAD YOU WAITED TILL NEXT CHAPTER CAUSE THATS ALL I IMAGINED
Now I need to cool off. I sat in bed giggling because of this

Oh boy time for some lemonade! (Gag that was lame but I couldn't help myself)
Roy already getting possessive so cute now we wait for when he starts getting jealous of Ed.
I know a lot of Roy/Winry shippers come from the old anime but I never really watched the first one. I've only read the wiki to find out why everyone kept saying Roy killed Winry's parents. Makes me wonder how watching Brotherhood made me ship them SINCE THEY NEVER EVEN TALK TO EACH OTHER. I think it was that one (and the only) fan art I found of them.