Reviews for At the Cottage |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great take on how things could've gone had the curse not come true. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rebelling Aurora was a really a nice shift. I kind of found nice that she was cold towards her parents, after all they were strangers. But it looks like she forgave everyone involved so everyone is happy. |
![]() ![]() This is really good please please make more but u said in the end to tell about any mistakes and this isn't really a mistake but, it seem to modern after rose is in the forest |
![]() ![]() This is a great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this twist on the story! Very funny but also cute and romantic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like your idea. However, I do think that Rose, was ooc. I don't think it would be in her nature to throw a hissy especially not to her aunt fairies. I even felt like she would've apologized to her aunts for escaping. Also, I think the conversations could've been placed into better context (Just nitty gritty stuff). There was a part when rose replied "thanks" and when Queen Leah referred to her as "baby". Such words wouldn't have been used in the 14th century. But again, good job on the story! I like the alternate ending, it was cute :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's a cute little story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it |
![]() ![]() Oh my gosh! Aurora DIDN'T complete MALEFICENT'S curse! Ha ha! In your face Maleficent! Aurora, I'm so proud of you. If you completed the curse, Maleficent would mock Flora, Fauna and Merryweather by saying, "You poor, simple fools! Thinking you could defeat me! Me! The mistress of all evil! Well, here's your precious princess!" she'd reveal you on the floor. The fairies would look shocked as Maleficent would laugh sinisterly and disappear, still laughing. Anyway, I'm so proud of you Aurora. Good job for not completing Maleficent's curse. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cuuuuuuuute :3 I really liked it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() fantastic story. At least they found a much easier way to break the curse. |