This story is getting more and more unbelievable and weird as we go

I know this is old and finished. Love the story but these dreams Giaus has of Amata just get in the way of the story I think

I'm shamelessly hijacking the 500th comment to tell you that I love this whole universe you created and I regularly reread everything. 3

Sidonis was so rude here? If I were Jane, I would walk out and won't help them at all. He forgot that he killed his teamates? Even if he had redeemed himself, Garrus will be the one who decide that he has been forgiven or not. WTF? Even if Tali betrayed them later, no one in the Normandy knows and this future people actions are disgusting. Sigh.

Love this work keep it up I am so enjoying this work

Loved the story! So happy I read this. Already read what you have on Destiny, and now I'm glad I backtracked. Hope to see more of your wotk

Ok so I binge-read this in like a week and honestly? I don't think I've ever read a better fanfiction in my life. You did the most superb job giving life to every single character. You have an amazing ability to incorporate and convey such a wide range of emotion in each chapter. Crucible made me laugh and cry so many times I lost count. Thank you for writing such a great story and I can't wait to read the sequel :)

-Kalo

Uh, yeah. Kinda binge-read this over a week, and it's something. You put tons of work into this, and it shows. In addition to having what you wanted to write in how many chapters mapped out, it never felt like you went over the scope of what you wanted for the writing. Great characters and dialogue, development, all that; that's some great work.

You've crafted a good story here. It was an awesome read, thank you for writing it. Gonna read the sequel, but I figured I'd post this here to show my appreciation.

This amazing writing and story-telling. do you have a facebook or tumblr for your talents?

mass effect meets star trek meets doctor who

Fantastic story! I have read it about 4 times and man is it amazing. I can not wait to finished the other story. :)

Holy...Okay, I just found this story, and I have been searching for this exact type of story. This is what I wanted! Thank you! I'm only on ch 13, but I felt a huge need to review now.

The depth...the sheer depth of this story has me blown away. This should've been an actual book or comic. Your ability to create a plot, design, and completely evolve chatacters is perfect. Even down to little back ground stories like expanding Karas character...it's things like this that readers love. We want to be here with the characters. We want to understand. Bravo!

I'm going to continue to read now. I just needed to tell you how amazing this already is.

Thanks for writing such a wonderful story.

I'm looking froward to the sequel. :)

That was one hellova ride. Bittersweet now that it's concluded. Thank you for this incredible piece of work!

A great ending for a great series. Still leave me with a lot of wondering about many things, though (lol), like how did Sarah lost contact with her parents? Is admiral Rivers one of Jane's grandparents or just another one of her relatives (since he referred to the old couple as 'they')? And what happened to Tali and did Garrus still want to give her a bullet? So many things I want ask! ;D