HI! Well first things first, I liked your story a lot mind you. I Like your development of the different characters slowly but gradually and with sence. No one changes in few hours ( unless something very bizarre happens...).

You express your story in a simple yet not too short not too long, thats perfect ( Everyone has a different writinh style no to worry).
Grammar and Ortography, 9/10 Im not great a this myself and so not picky just enough that I can read a story ( I had read many fic where I needed to imagine words and point horrible error in space and dots and just evil orthographs...baad.. ).
Plot : Very insteresting, please continue you have a stong yet not invulnerable female character, family and friends. Endless possibilities reganding males cause you only show them twince and only 4 speak so far ( promising and very nerve wracking...PLEASE I NEED TO KNOW WHAT'S NEXT!).

QUESTIONS: I usually like to imagine a story i'm reading like a picture book if you would like it. problem here I can't place the exact time and universe this is happening. I mean like in Robiing hood time ? King Arthur? So far it seems Naruto verse in a Middle Medieval stage but I would love you opinion in this. It will help me also with Social rules ( you briefly mention that hunting is not a 'polite' activity for women in this society so... not much help), common attire ( also depens on the time).
Will you create differences between were-wolf in your stoty? If so please explain...
How could Deidara have attack Sakura, wasnt the bone and leather necklace she wore have prevented ( I mean she order him to leave her alone... ) ? or it

But-but-but! But-but! WHYYYY?. WHY THE HELL DID YOU FREAKIN STOP!? -whimpers in a dark corner-.
5 YEARS LATER
-still in the corner...almost lifeless-

Don't let a few haters discourage you from writing this wonderful story, for all we know they prob. Have a stick up there asses and well that can be fairly uncomfortable. ;3 really hope you continue though!

Omg this is a really good!

I am vastly impressed by this story.I hope to see it continued.

Awesome! :D

Noooo don't stop writing!

I love this

Love this story! Please write more soon!

Yay amazing chapter . I really love the plot of the story and how the akatsuki want sakura. Update soon please this story is really interesting

please make more i love it so much please

Luv the story(: Don't let the haters get ya down! Also, I beta for people, and I hate it when they disappear off the face of the earth and get a new beta, so I think I get how you feel... I wish u luck with your story, and if you want someone to bounce ideas off of or use as a temperary or permanent beta (though I don't think you really need on, since ur spelling/grammar is good) feel free to pm me(: keep up the amazing story, hope to see a new chapter soon!

I like the direction this story it's taking. Very good. Can't wait to see what else you have in store for this. Keep going! RinnyWolf

This seems like a pretty interesting concept! I like the character dynamic shown so far, and I'm excited for the next update(but take your time! Don't rush or you might regret it!), soI hope your muse to write this continues to be kind!

awsome gtood show of detial hope u continue