Reviews for Proof of Life
Guest chapter 4 . 6/22
So I just started a lockdown rewatch of voyager and came across your post endgame stories! Brilliant! Hope you might someday finish This one!
Guest chapter 4 . 4/23/2019
Been waiting for years to see if this is getting an update. Your post-Endgame universa has always been pretty compelling. Hopefully you find the inspiration to update soon.
Bearmauls chapter 4 . 4/9/2019
You did not just leave me hanging on this chapter end, did you? So cruel!
Kerstin2302 chapter 4 . 1/16/2019
Hi!
I just read through your hole series for the third time. I love it! Perfect characterisation, a certain amount of humor and always a political background. Is there any chance that you won't leave us hanging on that awesome cliff of your own making? I will beg, if that helps any? Pretty please?
FicreaderT chapter 4 . 8/24/2018
Kahless! I didn't realize, when I started this story, that it was not complete. And now I can't believe there isn't more to read. What a cliffhanger! I realize it's been many years since this story was last updated, so I can only postulate that the muse for it has left you which makes me very sad because I would really like to read more. And I promise if you write it I will happily review it!

I have formed an idea for what I think (hope) will happen, but am not certain how traumatized Tom (and by extension those who love him) will be by the mission and whether the course of events will forever damage his relationship with Starfleet or reassert his belief in them. Either way, I'm sure you could write it better than my brain can imagine it. I will keep my fingers crossed that someday you will wish to return to this story and give it a conclusion. Thank you so much for this wonderful group of stories centered on my favorite characters from one of my favorite TV shows - it's been a wild ride!
Claire chapter 4 . 2/15/2018
Hey,

I love your fan fiction, I've followed your Voyager universe the whole way through and now it has no ending :(. I know it's a long time ago now (I'm late to the party), but did you ever finish this?

Well done though, great storylines and very realistic :)
Guest chapter 4 . 7/1/2017
No! You can't leave it like this! Please say you have been working on this...
same ol' Tgirl chapter 4 . 2/28/2017
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE say you haven't abandoned this!
Please say you've been at work on it, off and on over the past 4 years, and you've got some chapters you are ready to post any day now?!

IT CAN'T END LIKE THIS!
Danni chapter 4 . 9/3/2016
Amazing story. But I so need to find out what happens next
RAGAnne chapter 4 . 5/3/2016
Well, when I read your opening teaser I wasn't sure who I feared it might be but the possibility of it being Nicole never crossed my mind. And yeah, the Syndicate has made it personal whether it's really all about Tom or not. I just hope he takes someone with sense along because he has most definitely been compromised.
And on that note, I take heart that you still write the occasional Voyager piece and so there is hope that you will eventually find the time to return to this story. I'm glad you're enjoying your adventures with Hawkeye in the meantime.
RAGAnne chapter 3 . 5/3/2016
How better to get to the son than to attack the father, or any family member really? I find it interesting that the individuals on Voyager who should most know better (Harry, the Doctor, even Icheb) were the ones hounding Tom about going off half-cocked because it's "his father." I'm glad he's holding to the maturity on the outside even if he has to be an absolute mess inside.
RAGAnne chapter 2 . 5/3/2016
As bored as Tom was getting I was happy they were getting a slightly easier mission in space. Obviously it couldn't last because . . . this is space. Once Janeway ended up on the scene I started to get a little worried. Once Tom realized his Dad was also in the belt I started to get really worried. Suddenly we can't even pretend this is a simple mission any more.
RAGAnne chapter 1 . 5/3/2016
I've been avoiding reviewing every chapter just because I'm generally not that wordy (plus it would have inundated your inbox over the last week or so). But since this is your incomplete story I've decided I can get away with it.
Plus I just had to comment that it's interesting that Admiral Paris is coming down in favor of the Federation having talks with what would essentially be the "Rebel Alliance" of Orion. He admits himself that they are not the active government of Orion. Whatever happened to non-interference in local matters. :) I'm afraid I'm still going to have to side with Tom on this one. The people essentially currently in power on Orion want Tom dead for interfering in their business. Not someone I'd want to cozy up with.
starburst chapter 4 . 7/20/2015
Thank you so much for all of your stories. I love your post-Endgame universe. I truly hope you finish this one.
Guest chapter 4 . 2/1/2015
Love all your Tom Paris stories, brilliantly written & keep me longing for the next chapter or new story.
Will you be continuing Proof of Life? Would love to know what happens next & I'm sure I am not the only one.
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