This isn't really a review for this chapter, just a review overall, because this is as far as I've read for now. Your fanfiction is AMAZING! Like seriously though ITS AWESOME! I TOTALLY LOVE IT! Will you be doing all years or just the first year though, because I definitely need more of this. Also, will you include any WolfStar, its fine if you don't, because I think your stories are awesome either way, I just want to know.

Ps, the chapter about Lupins transformation was beautifully well written.

REMUS.
JOHN.
LUPIN.

DON'T.
YOU.
FREAKING.
DARE
CALL
YOURSELF.
A.
MONSTER.

that was great i rlly love it! your a great writer! :D

Absolutley loved it, such awesome writing! Good Job! :D

Loved this! :)

Awwwww

This is an amazing story.
Arianne

i love this fanfiction. But if you woke up in a white room what would your first thought be? mine would be: shit im dead i hope i died fighting evil.

W.R.I.T.E YEAR 2 PLEASE ! BEST MAURADER BOOKS OUT THERE ! WRITE WRITE WRITE !

WHEN IS "YEAR TWO" GOING TO BE HERE? Awesome story btw:)

write more! Are a boy r a girl. And i have a seggestion. wehenever you move from 1 time to another, one place to another or anything like that pls put it like this or something like it. ***2 hours later*** or ***ST Mungo***

I love the way u introduced the marauderes map

hi and your story is amazing pls keep updating fast as i read very fast. i love it and i really like the fact that you tell the story at aperspective of one ofthem at times. Keep writing.(scuse my spelling(even if not wrong))

Ooh, I'm glad they're close to figuring it out...

I just cannot put into words how I feel about this chapter. By far the best one so far, poor Remus! Please let the discovery of be really really angsty, pleeeeeeeeeeease?
Update soon, I love you!