I never thought about it that way! That is so cool. I like it even though it's short, which I'm fine with.

Okay, I like that idea. Keep it up!

Crescent Moon Sky

Hmm, I gotta say the Sugar Rush backstory was a little confusing but I really like the Fix-It Felix one. I won't say you have to but I would love to hear your take on Hero's Duty.

That's so cool! Love it! God, the original game, the improvements, the new game, the underlying programming finally remembered! *U* LOVE this! God, so adorable! That's one of the most beautiful things about the movie, when they really starting acting like brothers and they (or at least Felix) say it! *U* Rock on!

Wow, you are VERY clever with the back stories of these games! Seriously, I'm impressed. You have a wonderful, vivid imagination. You can do a Hero's Duty one if you want, but I'll be happy whether you do or not. Thanks for writing this; it's fun to think about!

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WOW! This was BEAUTIFUL! GEEZ! *U* Most beautiful thing I've read in this entire archive so far! WOW! *U* God, the attention to detail, the GORGEOUS description, the FLAWLESS and BEAUTIFUL figuring of the game's story itself, and DEAR LORD, I love this SO MUCH! *U* It is PERFECT! *U*

Okay, dude...the part about her Father being locked away within the Cola Mountain REALLY has me intrigued... If I gave you credit, do you think I could write a fanfic based around it? I'd LOVE that! It sounds so interesting! O_O

Nice beginning. I can't wait for more. :D

Just saw the actual movie, and reading this fic was really great :D

Wish there was more, but this chapter could definitely stand on its own regardless!

Oh, I like this! Nice explanation of the unfinished bonus level, the "real" King Candy, and why Vanellope couldn't be fully hacked out of the game. Well done!

Oh wow, I'm thoroughly impressed! I love how you so perfectly fit so many things from the movie into this little oneshot! You've really done an awesome job here! I really like the story you made. So cool! Thanks for writing this!

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