Reviews for Fever
Selena92 chapter 1 . 8/31/2019
Aww, poor Kakashi!

Good thing Gai is there, even if he can't really appreciate it at the moment.

I hope they'll get together soon!
NJWriter85 chapter 1 . 9/13/2017
I faved it the moment he said soup and penis. XD
CheesusCrust chapter 1 . 8/6/2017
hehehe...ADORABLE!
Boop chapter 1 . 7/5/2015
Yes yes yes. You wrote this 3 years ago, but yesssss.
Perfect.
Kudos.
Lots of Kudos.
QT05 chapter 1 . 5/3/2014
LOL! Omg, I haven't laughed so hard in awhile. Okay, your story "love and marriage" was pretty funny and I'm pretty sure I was smiling like a loon throughout the whole story but there is one specific line in story that made my side hurt from all the laughing. I don't know how you came up with this line but it's absolute gold: "I'll nourish you with soup and penis". Just awesome. That was just great.

Great job. Loved this short story.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/8/2013
You did great with the prompt XD
HipsterL chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
I liked it a lot. You're officially one of my fav authors! Was that thing that Gai though of about the opening of the 7th gate and saving an injured Kakashi cannon? If not please write a fic about it! Please! (Or tell me where you got it)
GDYRISAA chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
"Yes, please carry my naked body through the streets of Konoha."
Greatest line ever! I loved Gai's cluelessness in this fic, particularly when it came to the erotica section at the book store. It was so glaringly obvious, but you wrote it in subtley. I liked that. His slip-up was great, too.
The story progresses very smoothly, I didn't really notice until the end that we had gone from Gai simply grocery shopping to emotional angsting. You portray a wide variety of emotions in this story like in a real life situation without making them seem out of place as it often ends up.
L Mono chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
I liked this one for the mixture on that slight humour and angst. The relationship between Gai and Kakashi was done nicely and how, although it was from Gai's view, I could see Kakashi.
Yamon chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
Awww!
I simply love this combination! They are made for each other.
I would love to read one from the pther point of view,
for once Kakashi being the one who yearns for Gai.
Prescripto13 chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
""Yes, please carry my naked body through the streets of Konoha."

*imagines the outcome had Kishimoto had given his world smartphones and YouTube*

XD