Reviews for Fever |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, poor Kakashi! Good thing Gai is there, even if he can't really appreciate it at the moment. I hope they'll get together soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I faved it the moment he said soup and penis. XD |
![]() ![]() hehehe...ADORABLE! |
![]() ![]() Yes yes yes. You wrote this 3 years ago, but yesssss. Perfect. Kudos. Lots of Kudos. |
![]() ![]() LOL! Omg, I haven't laughed so hard in awhile. Okay, your story "love and marriage" was pretty funny and I'm pretty sure I was smiling like a loon throughout the whole story but there is one specific line in story that made my side hurt from all the laughing. I don't know how you came up with this line but it's absolute gold: "I'll nourish you with soup and penis". Just awesome. That was just great. Great job. Loved this short story. |
![]() ![]() You did great with the prompt XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked it a lot. You're officially one of my fav authors! Was that thing that Gai though of about the opening of the 7th gate and saving an injured Kakashi cannon? If not please write a fic about it! Please! (Or tell me where you got it) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Yes, please carry my naked body through the streets of Konoha." Greatest line ever! I loved Gai's cluelessness in this fic, particularly when it came to the erotica section at the book store. It was so glaringly obvious, but you wrote it in subtley. I liked that. His slip-up was great, too. The story progresses very smoothly, I didn't really notice until the end that we had gone from Gai simply grocery shopping to emotional angsting. You portray a wide variety of emotions in this story like in a real life situation without making them seem out of place as it often ends up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this one for the mixture on that slight humour and angst. The relationship between Gai and Kakashi was done nicely and how, although it was from Gai's view, I could see Kakashi. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww! I simply love this combination! They are made for each other. I would love to read one from the pther point of view, for once Kakashi being the one who yearns for Gai. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ""Yes, please carry my naked body through the streets of Konoha." *imagines the outcome had Kishimoto had given his world smartphones and YouTube* XD |