can't wait til this moves onto the 3rd film. I know rn they are working on a 4th film

Enjoying the story so far.
The OC isn't flawless but I find her more enticing than a lot of others I've seen. Her actions have lasting consequences that in turn create more problems for her to work through. I enjoy watching her grow and interact with the other characters.
You've done a wonderful job creating an engaging story.
There are a few spelling errors here and there, but none that halt the flow of the story. Keep up the good work.

I love this story it is my favorite I have read it over and over again

Love this so much. Hope you write a sequel.

Good job adding the character to the plots. Was a awesome ride. Thank you.

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

One of the very few fics out there that kept Riddick in character. Too many make him some weird pyscho killer who gets turned on by death, others make him too angsty, nihilistic, beast-like, etc. Some don't even keep him Riddick. I think you did a remarkable job keeping his personality. Enjoyed the fic, even with the spelling mistakes and odd wording.

You might want to change the part about Jack sitting, you mention that she's a girl but Serena wouldn't know that at this point in time.

What an awesome fic! Probably the best Riddick fic I have read.

This was an absolutely amazing fic! :3 by far the bras Pitch Black/Riddick story I've found. I'm RLY hoping you'll consider writing a continuation for the next moves (or movies if they continue the series)

Again, amazing work! :)

Loved this book will there be updates or a sequel?

AWESOME!

I absolutely loved it! This is by far the best Pitch Black/Riddick story I have read on here. I found it two days ago and have not been able to stop reading it at every available moment. I almost cried when I realized your story had ended. I would love it if you would write another part for the new movie. Loved your character, she is original and I can tell you took your time building her personality and back story. Not only did you add an awesome OC character while still keeping to the movie plot's, but you managed to keep Riddick in character. There is only one word I can think of to describe this piece of writing... AMAZING!

I enjoyed your story immensely, you kept Riddick in character and did the Riddick fanfic domain some justice as your fanfic happens to be one of the few that actually kept true to Riddick. Please continue the great work.
Regards

I believe Selena has a place in my heart, great job :)