Reviews for Where Our Fate Lies
Peter Facinelli Fan chapter 44 . 8/10
Its funny. Your AN on this chapter refers to Stepgenie Meyers "Never Published book Midnight Sun" It has since been released very recently haha
Nrrdgrrl87 chapter 64 . 6/30
Thank you so much for writing this story! I have trouble believing English isint your first language, your writing is so beautiful! It moves me as I read it and I find I can’t put it down! This B/C story is definitely more melancholy then your other, but no less beautiful!
Bookwormkat1 chapter 64 . 6/5
finally made myself finish this. I've read it many times before, but only up until Victoria and Riley come. I was scared of knowing what came next, but I'm glad I finally managed it. it was an excellent story, thank you for writing.

my favourite part of the story is where she is human and struggling so much in the hospital, and their interactions. you capture the emotions so perfectly, and that's why I come back to this story again and again.
as for not having English as your first language, whilst there was the occasional word error, it was usually a misspelling that caused it to become a different recognised word, so it wasn't picked up. but it made little difference apart from the occasional stumbling of the eye on the word, because it was easy to work out what you were actually trying to say, and the story carried on.
I'm not like BellaI grew up with everything wet and squashy and green. I love cloudy wet days, but that also teaches me to enjoy the sun when it does come out. though at the minute, we've had endless weeks of sun and heat, and everything's brown. But it's healing now, it's coming alive again, because it's raining again now. It's windy and wet and the wilting roses outside the window are recovering.
Bookwormkat1 chapter 63 . 6/5
In America, they use I do. Here in the UK, we say I Will. I asked my local vicar, and he explained the whole reason I Do is famousHollywood, apparently XD
Bookwormkat1 chapter 1 . 4/16
after reading this story a second time, so!etching jumped out at me. he's in the US, and there's a Eurasian Eagle Owl. They're called Eurasian for a reason. Also, they have very very orange eyes, not yellow. maybe go for a Great Grey Owl? I'm not sure if they're in the Vancouver area, but they're definitely American. And they have very yellow eyes and they're big. Very big.
Leafey chapter 64 . 12/7/2019
All the feels. Thank you for this amazing story
Slytherinn96 chapter 64 . 3/10/2019
I just wanted to thank you for writing this amazing story. The way you captured emotions and situations were so raw and real, this story is one of my favourite fanfics that I’ve ever had the pleasure to read. Thank you for writing it!
it's simply me n you chapter 35 . 12/21/2018
Emmett makes me laugh. So glad that Carlisle has begun to realize his feelings and it looks like Bella is on her way there too. Yay!
chellekathrynnn chapter 44 . 12/20/2018
Okay but I am still curious about one thing. Who was the little girl Blowing bubbles in Bella’s hospital room?
Sassyvampmama chapter 63 . 12/5/2018
I read this four and a half years ago (apparently, though I forgot about it) and enjoyed it just as much the second time around. Thanks for sharing it with us.
goldseadragon chapter 13 . 11/21/2018
This chapter makes absolutely no sense in the context of the story, maybe an upload error?
12397 chapter 64 . 11/2/2018
I adored this story. WOW!
1tinac chapter 64 . 10/18/2018
Great story.
anyeshabaner chapter 35 . 3/14/2018
BEST CHAPTER EVER!111
klarsen117 chapter 19 . 2/15/2018
I have a feeling that the little girl in her dreams is Renee
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