Reviews for Emptiness |
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Marucha chapter 1 . 3/13/2019 Can I share your story in Wattpad? I will put the credit and also I want to make the cover. :) |
Riya1112 chapter 1 . 3/3/2018 The story was beautiful. I really liked it. I liked how it had some dark undertones but ended on a happy note. Thank you for writing this. |
Rei.Avi chapter 1 . 10/6/2017 Crying a little. Life is hard |
MoonIllusion chapter 1 . 3/13/2017 I feel no sympathy towards Teddy at all |
DeviousClass chapter 1 . 9/24/2016 Ungrateful heat indeed u.u |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/23/2016 It was great... loved it |
Chandra Migina chapter 1 . 6/10/2016 wow, that story was amazing, absolutly amazing |
silberfuchsII chapter 1 . 1/18/2016 Good evening! I'm surprised how good this is, a prostitute Harry is not something I could imagine before, but you manage quite well to let it all sound convincing. Even Draco is not out of character, I'm impressed. And further you have a great writing style and a nice way of story-telling. Good work. Silberfuchs |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/10/2015 This was amazing, so heartfelt I was practically sobbing by the end! |
AliceCullen3 chapter 1 . 10/18/2015 LOVE IT! |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/15/2015 OMG IM CRYING THAT WAS SO SAD |
babyvfan chapter 1 . 6/10/2015 Dude, as wow and damn as that was, I have to ask. What is with you and the angst? Why do you love it so? How can you stand it? |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/10/2015 This isn't AU. It's non-magical, and you need to warn for that. Basically, it's original fiction with a few names stolen from JKR. What does this have to do with her world? |
alba chapter 1 . 5/1/2015 remarkable, well done |
AntiSocialBookWorm chapter 1 . 4/5/2015 I may be playing devil's advocate but, at the risk of being called a judgemental bitch, I completely understand why Teddy reacted the way he did. It wasn't just the fact that Harry was a prostitute, but the fact that he was knowingly putting Teddy in an unsafe living environment. No amount of money is worth that. He should have just handed over his rights of Teddy to Molly and Arthur from the beginning and got himself visitation rights or something. Not to say Harry's a bad person, he just did some very stupid things, morals aside. And I don't appreciate everyone jumping down Teddy's throat. How mature do you expect a fifteen year old boy to be when placed in this kind of situation? Cut him some slack! And fuck Draco and his holier than thou bullshit! Yes, Teddy did need a serious wake up call and realize that just because Harry did things he didn't agree with, betrayed his trust and was all around really irresponsible doesn't mean he's a bad person. Everything he did, he did because he loved Teddy and wanted to give him the world. But that doesn't make it right and doesn't mean Teddy isn't justified in feeling angry and hurt. And is Draco really in any position to be talking down to Teddy? Are we really going to forget that he was one of Harry's clients? His regulars? He saw what type of environment Teddy was living in and didn't lift a finger to get Teddy out of there? What if one of Harry's clients hurt Teddy? What if one of them touched Teddy? So much could've happened and neither Draco nor Harry seemed to realize. This isn't a black and white 'Teddy was being a judgemental brat' or 'Harry was an unfit guardian' issue. Both sides did fucked up shit but its understandable why they did what they did (except Draco who just seemed so unnecessary and annoying - honestly couldn't Molly or Arthur have told him about how Harry still did so much for him even after he shut him out of his life?). |