Reviews for Familiar DxD |
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ChimaTigon chapter 4 . 12/17/2018 Why is this chapter a copy of the previous chapter? |
sondowth chapter 2 . 12/1/2018 Where's Saito's maid Siesta? |
Kirito Swordsman chapter 24 . 2/8/2017 please update more |
Vangran chapter 4 . 5/1/2015 this is the same as chapter 3. |
OshiroNai chapter 24 . 1/15/2015 Such Boom Much Void Very Louise Well, that's true. Crimson Dragon Emperor R D |
Guest chapter 24 . 12/1/2014 how did you spell all that right? |
Fyr RedNight chapter 24 . 12/2/2014 Nice chapter, you managed to show how Saito was coping with Julio's death very well... I also liked the actual settings presented on the Ostland, between Azazel's lab, the Zero Fighter place and the bathing room, nice gag by the way, that's really cool... Also the chapter's end is great, the stand off with Satan and Saito makes me wonder on the outcome. Anyway, like I said at the start, nice chapter... Keep up the good job ! |
ZeroFang chapter 24 . 12/1/2014 by the way, where the chapter before this? |
Jose19 chapter 24 . 12/1/2014 I sometimes wonder about Saito nothing personal but Issei has the best girl in the series because Louise is a classic Tsundere that is hard to deal with, and she still punishes Saito for whatever she does because Rias doesn't do this to Saito . Saito should just leave Louise for another girl or do like Issei have a Harem because there are other girls that are better than Louise because her Tsundere personality and traits are difficult to swallow. |
Firem78910 chapter 4 . 8/5/2014 umm their are 2 copies of this chapter and no chapter 3 |
unknown1124 chapter 23 . 8/1/2014 Angra Mainyu. Oh shit all the worlds evils. the curses it can give. Holy grail war. MAKE SAITO LIKE BERZERKER FROM FATE STAY ZERO FOR A BALANCE BREAKER! |
Memento Mori - The Truth chapter 1 . 8/1/2014 Okay, you have a good idea for a story here, but your spelling and logic is atrocious. I cannot find a single paragraph with every word being spelled correctly, the grammar is terrible, and nothing is explained at all. Like how Aarondite/Derflinger became a holy-demonic sword. It was a holy sword so when the spirit of a non-demonic swotd went into it, it became a holy demonic sword? How would Saito take photos in Hakelgania when it's an era without photography? Why is Saito acting so differently? Your story has such great potential, but as it is right now, I can't even read it. |
Number III chapter 1 . 5/16/2014 Editing. You should really come back and do some touch ups on this chapter. I would really enjoy to read your story, but I keep getting turned away by all the minor grammatical errors sprinkled about. |
Shin XIX chapter 22 . 5/7/2014 Does Azazel have his artificial sacred gear Fafnir here? |
Othinus chapter 1 . 3/1/2014 This... really is lame. |