Thanks for sharing.

Hahahahaaha oh god this was so hot and hilarious at the same time xD Loved itttt!

That was hilarious and cute, I loved it and awesome job

XD i bet your teachers LOVED this XD

I absolutely love the story!
Love the twist ending ;)
It's nearly 2 in the morning and I was laughing so hard at reading this chapter! :)
It wasn't morinaga's fault that souchi missunderstood him in the first place... But it was morinaga's fault that he came without warning. And that was what made this priceless XD
This is a really good story

Haha, omg that was amazing! You really gotten thier characters down well, and i like the twist at the end ;D

Your grammar and spelling aren't bad, but the paragraphs are too close together to facilitate smooth reading. However, you keep the boys in character, so I commend you for it. It's a little rare to find stories centering on oral sex, so this was different. Overall, it was good. However, I suggest you work on your spacing a bit. For one thing, each paragraph should be separated by a line of blank space. Observe how other writers here do it.

In fact, I just did it. If you write this way, it's much easier to read. I do hope you continue to write, and improve as you go along. Good luck to you.

Hehe, not quite what I was expecting but I'll take it nonetheless! _ A nice little piece of sexiness!

That's just so typical of Souichi; knows the guy for five years, and still can't remember his birthday! XD

Yes, you CAN do that Souichi! Good god, for the sake of the fans PLEASE let it be that! It's so hard to find stories with Souichi on top, so PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE...

Oh, please, PLEASE let it be THAT! I LOVE Souichi-on-top stories! You have to continue this!