I like it. It's adorable and really cute. That may not be what you were going for but I really liked if

very nice

Wonderful. I love this than anything.

aww that is soooo sweet

Oh my goodness, it was beautiful :) depressing but beautiful. Loved the detail and expression, great job

relieved that mokuba and kaiba had someone to soothe them
memories like that must be hard to deal with :/
nice work :)

Heh... Heh heh. I find myself giggling creepily while reading this big hunk o' fluff right here! Good thing no one else is awake at my house! Uke!Seto is adorable! Always. Adorable. And protective/big bro!Jou is cute as well!

Keep on writing! I love this so much!

wuaaaaaaahhhh :D epic as always :D i love the way you wrote how seto and mokuba were interacting :D and i love how you showed that joey wasnt suddenly comfortable about how to act around seto. sometimes people make them instantly work amazingly together and it feels less real :D well done my dear :D keep it up and DFTBA!

Despite this being very out of character. I like the flow and emotional turmoil that was displayed. Glad that you didnt make it mushy or fluffy. Nice work