Wish there was more to read.

Good so far. Why did you stop? It's now Dec 11th 2016, I'd kinda like to see it finished before Xmas 2017. Are you up for the challenge?

This is an interesting idea. I like it! While I've heard of Mara Jade, I haven't read the EU books so I don't know much about their history. Are you drawing from the books or blazing your own path? Anakin being there changes many things, which is why I'm wondering. Anyway, I hope you'll update soon!

Please update. I'd like to know what'll happen next.

nice

Is Jix going to be in this?

Awesome chapter. Definitely follows the EU somewhat. A good element to add in even though it would be painful for both Luke and Anakin would be for him to ask Anakin for advice. Anakin, who doesn't trust Mara Jade in the first place, could explain what exactly happened between him and Padme. Both father and son could have that father and son type of bond seen already in Chapter 11 and both would be able to give and get advice from each other.

Luke and Mara are obviously attracted to each other. Why deny it? ;)

I look forward to your next update!

Hmmmmmm... I like this story a lot! I hope we can get a new chapter soon!

So happy you updated! :) This chapter certainly showed a lot of bonding between father and son, even between Luke and Mara. Very touching indeed!

I look forward to your next update!

Nice chapter!

A very nice bit of Luke and Mara-and Luke and Anakin.

I know it's been a year since you updates this story but I live in hope that you do some day. Love this so far.

Now if Luke can heal Anakin's lungs so he can get out of that blasted suit. I think people will be more accepting of him as Anakin & not Vader if they can see the sincerity in his blue eyes. They will also see him as human & not a monster so much.

I look forward to your update when you can. :)

This is great.

Wow, I wonder, how that will end.