Ah ottimo

I really love this story.
Though it made me sad when everyone started dying.
I know it was right since they banished Naruto, but I still have attachments to them.
Even though I knew it was right for them to die.
And the epilogue though, makes me sad because Naruto, Hinata, and the jinchuuriki had to see their friends die in the past hundreds of years. And when their kingdom was destroyed.
Thank you for writing this. It gives me a lot to reflect on.

This is special. Only special stories makes me so interested in places like the empire. I want to live there.

Oh, snap! You said Hanabi and her cousin by her dad's identical twin (ie; her HALF-BROTHER) got busy.
Well. Not the best idea, from a genetics standpoint. Okay, so...it's been done.
Count them toes, son.

You and this story are so amazing. Its amazingly written and so well put together and realistic and so damn satisfying. Me writing something like this is a goal right now.

Fuck Hinata. A creepy, weak, stupid fucking cunt. Like your mother. Except your mother was also a two dollar cocksucker who took any dick she can get in the hopes of having a child that was way better than the miserable pile of fail that you are.

Stupid auto spell. Tobi not TiVo

Lol TiVo was only powerful due to his eye skill. If that is gone he would be defeated a lot easier.

Ok first do NOT put a bio at the front. It kills some of the story right then and there. The Snake would have been killed years ago. Then.. You know what too plot holes to list. Good luck.

You used that line from the 1990 TMNT movie! What Naruto said to Kakashi is almost the same as what Splinter said to the Shredder! About death without honor?

Didn't Kakashi die in Suna?

Ok, so I read the other version of this story and I just don’t think I can make it through this one. No offense, I mean there a lot of great ideas here and the story has a good premise, but these are some of the most one dimensional characters ever. It honestly just seems like a story about stroking Naruto so he’s the biggest, baddest, and strongest. Which Is not necessarily a problem, I guess, but it just wasn’t done in the best way. Like I couldn’t help but roll my eyes at some of the obvious stroking. I mean, I feel that you did try and that a lot of thought went into this and what you wanted, but the characters were flat, the ones playing the enemy especially, to the point where it was just annoying that they kept spouting the same nonsense every time you wrote them. Arrogance was more equal to stupidity on a level that made it seem astronomical that they were once ‘good’ people who earned their ninja ranks. Their motivations could have been fine, if more was given as to the reasoning or decent into who they became vs who they were. I’m sorry to leave such a negative review. The stories weren’t all bad and there are some parts I enjoyed. I hope this is somewhat helpful and that you continue to write.

I know this story is old, but GODDAMN I love it! Especially THIS Chapter!

lol kurama the nine tails fox ran a curio shop!

I was worried about a story using a non elemental nation as primary backdrop but you nailed i. Excellent work!