Slightly confusing, but I like it. Very mysterious. Please continue :D

Please write more, Pitch is written in perfect character - 0

i am intrigued. i do believe i've found someone who really knows how to manipulate pitch's character and not overplay it. the way you write is quite beautiful. please continue soon.

holy shit i love hte way you write! dang its gorgeous! keep it up-this is literally beautiful

I've no words... this is absolutely brilliant! Please do write more of it!

Oh I know! I felt similarly for pitch after the movie. Poor guy...
I like your style; this was poetic and beautiful

this is so good I think I'm just gonna weep