| Reviews for BloodXAlice |
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  wdu39 chapter 1 . 9/3/2018 Veri n1c3lpCst0riKu |
 ikemengalore2014 chapter 1 . 12/30/2014 I'm sorry but this is the wrong category. This Alice no binetsu 100. The category you are looking for is heart no kuni Alice. I would love to read this again, so please post it under the right category. Have a nice day |
| Kpeter chapter 7 . 1/20/2014 Please write more this story is really good. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/30/2013 You need more punctuation, such as commas, for clarification. You used the wrong form when Blood was speaking to Alice. It should have been, "Looks like you're finally awake, Alice." There are a few spelling errors, but it's not to the point where it isn't clear what your meaning was. Blood and Alice are both extremely out of character. It's entertaining, just inaccurate. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/30/2013 You switch views from third to first person. |
| A That One Geek chapter 7 . 9/26/2013 I love this story but I wish the chapter were longer. Also I think you could use a you take my suggestion to heart id be happy to. I can't wait for the next one so please update soon :) |
| KaileyBlake chapter 7 . 7/17/2013 Cute story :) I really like the idea :) keep on writing |
| God Fenrir chapter 7 . 7/4/2013 a cute chapter! i like it X3 |
| TheNerdling chapter 6 . 7/3/2013 Ahhh, amour. Confusing and delirious in of itself, but treasured all the more |
| TheNerdling chapter 5 . 7/3/2013 0_0... |
| God Fenrir chapter 6 . 7/3/2013 yay! they will marry! :3 hope you update soon |
| Jane Archerion chapter 3 . 6/16/2013 Or one lives and the other dies... |
| Jane Archerion chapter 4 . 6/16/2013 Live! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/24/2013 Live I say |
| Headless Chocobo chapter 1 . 5/17/2013 Nooooo! Don't have them die! I love dee and dum! Just a couple suggestions- it's really hard to read because I can't tell who's talking when. It'll really help if you indent every time a new person speaks, that way its less confusing. Other than that, it's really good! Can't wait to see your next update! |
