I believe you mentioned Charlotte had went shopping with them, I’ll have to go back and check.

They had already asked the wolves to keep a look out before they left Forks. Didn’t like the naked thing. Not sure I like the human drinking thing either. The fat guy that Garrett ate didn’t seem bad, he was just outside smoking a cigarette. I wondered if he had children while he was being killed, being out of shape didn’t seem like a good enough reason to die.
They should just stay where they are and have the wolves call if they need them.

I hope Bella doesn’t mention that Victoria has met her mate. Not sure how Laurent will react to that.

Maybe Laurent heard about the kidnapping and wanted to save her? Maybe he didn’t realize she had back up.
There is a lot of talk about the mating pull and the pain. Garrett should be able to find Bella by the pull if that’s the case. The way it was described it sounds like he should be able to. They all should have been able to follow Laurent’s scent on their own without help. Laurent could have been a measly five miles away but nobody even tried to go after bella

That makes a bit more sense where Edward is concerned. Still not sure why he needs a newborn army to take Bella. All this planning is going to get him caught by Carlisle and Esme. He needs one vampire to go in and snatch her and bring her to him.

Why is Edward trying to get nomads to take Bella? That doesn’t make any sense. What does he want with her? If he wanted her than he could just come back and snatch her up and run.

I fricken KNEW it.

My only guess is Laurant. I can’t think of anyone else. I can’t wait to see wherever the heck you decide to take this

Man why you tortured poor Laurent. He didn't know any better. he thought he was follow g Vicki's lead You could have given him mercy. since he worship Vic she may have been good to go after Edtard

Wonderful storyI do love the pairing

Loved it!

Out of all of the vampires there there is not a tracker amongst them? I can't believe that either Jasper or Garrett aren't good trackers.

So there are a dozen vamps there to watch over her but not one is around her knowing that Eddie is after her,really?

Denalis
just curious why you picked some of the vampires you did.
Allowed.
Considering Stefan and Vladimir are old school and look at humans as cattle.

Nice! Thanks for sharing