OMG, I love your story, personally the chapters are great length and i didn't find it long at all. I understand everything you write, and it's not confusing. Your details are easy to imagine . And your writing holds many emotions which make me laugh loud and sometimes I even cry ( I don't know why ) . When I read it I feel like I'm watching the anime which is something that I look for when reading fanfic. ( I know I'm ranting but this is the first review I've written. And if I'm being honest the cliff hanger left my heat crying in shock and anxiety when I saw now more chapters.) I hope youe doing good and your safe . I look forward to seeing your next chapters.

It's been years since I logged into my account, but this fic has always been a favourite for me. I love the set up and the execution of this fic and I always find myself coming back to it to read it every once in a while. I know that it may never be updated again but it will always be a favourite. Thank you for writing it

Knowing Natsu, the instant this whole mess is over with and can finally take Lucy and their sons back home, not only will she become a Fairy Tail member, again... He's probably gonna want to have many more kids with her (guessing on the dragon way, with how very few there are of them, they want a nest full of hatchlings)... Especially, on having a Mini-Lucy. And this time, he'll be there for her pregnancy, the entire time, celebrating the lives they'll create, together.

...I'm betting Mira and Erza would be more than happy to assist him on setting their wedding... With a big meal, included, to satisfy Natsu and the other Dragon Slayers.

If Levy and Gajeel confess to each other and want to get marry, too, then they should have a double wedding.

Cute story, continue writing ️

Praying to all the gods above that one day, you finish this story, or someone else does. So absolutely amazing. Wow. Thank you for writing this and sharing your talent!

Ik it’s years later but omgggg the most amazing and in depth story with plot twist, I almost started believing this was the real manga or real story. Insanely good plot

This is such a good plot. I wanted to ask if you are planning to write the next chapter soon?

Yes! This was the scene I liked. I kind of wish Natsu let his possive side out the second time for a round too, lol.

I like how you wrote the love scenes of Natsu and Lucy. I like aggressive/dominant Natsu. I hope to see more love scenes... I liked it better from Natsus POV though.

hey ive read your story lik 3 or 4x over the past couple of years nn it always amazes me are yu considering continuing the story?

I have enjoyed reading so far can't wait to continue! Thanks for the great work!

Please please please make a new chapter.

loved it

This has bedn really amazing so far i cant wait to finish

I AM GONNA REVIEW AND BEG YOU TOO UPDATE. Even if it's been years. I believe in miracles. I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS STORY SO PLEASE EVEN IF YOU HAVEN'T UPDATED IT SINCE 2014 AND IT'S 2018 IT IS GREATLY AWAITED AND LOVED. Plus you already funished 32 chapters, meaning you only have a few more to go. Unless you had some twist up your sleve in mind. However know that this story is absolutely amazing and I can officially dje haply!