That was really good, that was so cute :D

Can't wait for the next chapter, and I'm very happy with the story so far, I was very disappointed in Arthur's lack of reaction to Merlins dissapearance the entire episode... Please update soon?

Thank you! Great story! I love it. This is how I wanted this episode. I am looking forward to the next part!

Great chapter, though it felt a bit rushed. I think you could have really extended it a lot longer. Update soon!

i really like this :) please update soon.

I loved this episode and I love what you are doing with it. update soon!

I was writting a similar story today.
Same concept, but different.
I can't wait to see how yours turns out.

This is an interesting start. I can't wait to see where this goes.

A nice alteration. Please update soon!

Good story. But, there needs more descriptions and you need to start each new bit of dialogue with a new paragraph. Each person has his or her own line.