Reviews for Not feeling well
lazyReader54 chapter 12 . 11/16/2019
I love this story and it's one of my favourites since it's got my favourite turtle being a little sick. But the fact that it has just stopped like that is making me sad. I need more! I know that it was 6 years ago but I NEED MORE!
Jasmine Wolfheart chapter 12 . 12/5/2018
Hello!

I know it's been over five years since you updated this story but I did really love if you decided to one day continue on this story course it's SO GOOD AND I LOVE IT. And I did love to read the end of this story and know how it will end and what will happen to Donatello. Will he die, will he survive? We don't know!?

/ Love from a big Donatello-fan 3
Guest chapter 12 . 9/8/2018
Soo uhh.. You're late(ಠ_ಠ)... I'm guessing you're busy? Sick? Or dead already? Hahah sorry can't help it Sorryyyyy... Anyways I rlly love ur fanfic. I hope u update soon. Mmnot good at waiting
Aqua-Flora chapter 12 . 7/2/2016
UPDATE. PLEASE. THIS STORY IS AMAZING
obsessivecartoonlover chapter 1 . 5/24/2016
Don can't catch a break can he?
FearlessLeader-Leonardo chapter 6 . 5/6/2016
Awww poor Donnie :(
KiddyMeda chapter 12 . 8/3/2015
Well then Happy Late B-Day 8D Update soon please! The suspense is killing me!
kaitlyn fryar chapter 12 . 7/21/2015
please put up a another chapter
Buttergriffin332 chapter 12 . 1/29/2015
Karai's personalty you nailed! I LOVE THIS STORY! When is the next chapter?!
Agent B Tiger chapter 3 . 1/27/2015
When I was younger, I used to rewind Dumbo and watch the Pink Elephant song over and over and over and over and over and over.
Yeah, for some reason, the intoxicated hallucination scene was my favorite...
kinda disturbing.
taro hero 1 chapter 12 . 11/6/2013
*sings* haaaaapppyyyy birthday to yooou! And this story is great! Really fun to read! ( though I'm not sure why I love to Read about torture to my favorite character so much...) Anyway, your doing great! Keep up the good work!
Rose Kaylien chapter 12 . 8/18/2013
UPDATE! I demand it of you! Hehe
theresa.roarty chapter 10 . 8/1/2013
are you going to post more of the story?
tmntninja chapter 12 . 7/18/2013
Good job . Poor Donnie updated earliter they
bindweed-flower chapter 12 . 4/27/2013
It's a great chapter, I liked the conversation between Leo and Karai and that last scene with then sleeping next to each other was simply adorable.

"For awhile he listened to the harmonies of Raph's soft breathing, Mikey's snores, and Donnie's rough and raspy breaths. For anyone else this would be annoying, but to him it was sweet music, just being able to know that his brothers were still alive and breathing acted much like a lullaby as he slipped into a long anticipated rest." - That was just beautiful! : D

About you writing Leo's POV despite him not being your favourite... I've experienced something similar: that sometimes it's easier to write the POV with a character that’s neutral and use them to observe your favourite characters. So I think it’s a common thing, andthat it usually turn out really well.

Well good job with the story and happy (belated) birthday!
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