So fluffyyyy
Very nice, I loved it!

However, I'm French, and I just wanted to warn you, there are quite a few mistakes '
I can help you correct them, if you want.

Archillies you trololor! XD
I like the way you put Connor as a hard man, yet his soul needs to be cured and Aveline as his healer!

I loved this very much. Good work.

mH.

This was as entertaining as it was enjoyable. It was refreshing to see some française dans ce histoitre- I can appreciate your effort. Your characterization was great- I shall be sure to check out your other fics :)
Stay lovely,

juno57

Achilles! XD You embarrassed them! Lol I thought you portrayed the relationship quite realistically. Nice!

I was trying to tell u i love this pairing 2 but nvm :D TT u made me so happy in 2 time in 2 day TT:d

Great story, you stayed true to character. I'd like to see more stories written about this pair :-)

I love this piece! I've been meaning to review since last week but time is just so sparse for me these days. It honestly deserves way more reviews than it has. I happened to find this very in-character and just plain out perfect. I was actually a bit disappointed when you didn't write as much of the steamy scene as I would have hoped! XD *me and my dirty mind*

I loved how you wrote Connor, he's so contented and he doesn't even really realize it at the end until Achillies totally embarrasses them!

Interesting. I will read more. Your totally right Poor Connor is a lone wolf type. Kid really needs some love.I like the interaction you made between the two, while reading I could see that they were really comfortable around each other which I know can be really hard to do when writing about a character as complex and unpredictable as Connor. But you've done it well and I cannot wait to read more from you!

Please update soon...

That was adorable. I'm still grinning xD