This one game me mixed emotions until the end. It was more on the fluff side than smut for me honestly. I have a feeling this is your first smut. If it is kudos not bad. The smut feels rushed and like you gave it no thought. Charactera are ooc but whatever they have to be in a sex situation. Roxy was great. My favorite part though was the end. Not because it ended no. But for the velvet box which I am assuming is a engagement ring. Which is why this is so fluffy. Have mixed feelings about the smut but love the fluff. Hope yo see more from you and keep at it.

Awesome! Loved it!

Ooooommmmmmggggggg! There so perfect for eachother *que gross sobbing in happieness* new otp

cutteeeeeeee

*squeeee* the ending made me smile and giggle3333 this is awesome great job!

omg. this is sooo good! and the end is so sweet! it made me cry...