Nice one shot ,though a sad ending...

Amazing. I've never read anything like this before; it's a completely new idea I've never even thought of.
The fall of the Olympians was great. Edith Hamilton said that the Greek and Roman gods were never heroic, because they never were at the risk of losing everything when she talked about the Norse Gods.
I like that you made the gods vulnerable and mortal. The Apollo and Artemis scene at the end was heartbreaking.
Just great.

The song added to the overall mood.
Instead of a helpless Percy, I saw a determined, angry Percy.
The song was great. I've never heard of Les Friction before today, and I find that I like them very much!

The only thing I would like to criticize (Oh, here it goes again...): When a new person speaks, a new paragraph should be made.

that is so sad

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That was... heart wrenching.

this is really good. very emotionally deep. this would be an interesting plot for a 3-shot or so. It would be nice to document the fall of all of the gods and an epilouge of what happened after

Sobs. Beautiful story.

So sad, but great.

Well now, that was a rather moving story. The song... honestly made me feel as if living was of no use anymore... as if the last shred of p hope which man has clung to has finally broken. I don't quite understand the purpose of such a plot... is it to show hopelessness or perhaps you're making a reference to the 12/21/12 thing. A story about how the earth will end perhaps? Or am I simply interpreting the story wrongly and am delving much too far in the meaning of a story?
Nevertheless, it is a nice story although, truth be told, it's not my type of story .

... I am speechless. There is nothing I can say about a masterpiece such as this. This isn't a play on the Mayan apocalypse right?

are u planning on making more

Cool song and such a sad story i like wanted to cry. You really know how to put the emotion into it i love it.

...Wow...shocking...absolutely amazingly shocking! I love it create a prequel or something!

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Nice :) but you really need to update your other stories :l

So what caused this