Keep up the good work!

plz update

really really wish there was more to read pls update

Hey, just thought I'd let you know that there are people still interested in this story, if you decide to finish it. I've never read about a Embry/Quil/Bella sort of triangle. Well, Jake is still interested as well. I hope it won't turn into "Eclipse" though, here stringing both of them along. So far it seems Bella is firm in her feelings for Embry and only Embry. Wasn't Quil married to Molly Swan in the books? I don't get why almost every fan fic has me so against relationships with 'pale faces' when he was married to one. I know that you can change such facts for the sake of a story. However you wrote that Swans and Atearas were always drawn to another. So their bloodlines have mixed in the past. Why would Paul say that Quil didn't want his legitimate grandson with a white girl? It's the only thing that doesn't add up. I have another question. I'm genuinely curious about it. In many fics Embry can't imprint because he is half Quileute. But more then half of the pack imprinted in girls who aren't Quileute at least not full blood. Quil, Jake, Sam...all of their kids wouldn't be able to imprint. Why should they imprint in non Quileutes? By that theory it effectively eliminates imprinting which apparently is positive for the pack. Or did this generation need a richer gene pool because the tribe is shrinking?
Also other pack member have non Quileute blood in them as well. For example Quil. He is one quarter Swan. Why can he imprint? Does it have to be more than 50% and not 100%?
I know that you can't answer for the other authors but I'm genuinely curious about your thought process. Is there a theory? It did you just take that fact from other stories? Did you just need that fact for the story to make sense? Or did Meyer establish it somewhere and I am just not aware? It would make sense. Her books are fool of inconsistencies, so I wouldn't be surprised if she established another fact without thinking it through. I would love some answers and maybe future chapters.

super awesome story

LOVED IT!

Seriously I really want to know what else you had planned for this cause this story was awesome! Just Quil and Embry fighting eachother for Bella and it turning out that old Ateara is manipulating events... Gahh I really wish I could have more.

Please write more Please?

Amazing story... wish you would continue.

Great story! I hope you decide to continue it. :)

You need to write more to this story! I need to read more, that's how much I love your story. Sooooo PLEEEEEEEEASE WRITE MORE

I like it keep me updated

Wow what a mess
Looking forward to more
Please update soon

Interesting story so far. I love Embryo/Bella fics and there aren't a lot of them. Hope you update this soon.

Soooo awesome! :D update faster please

Man. I just found it & its getting GOOD! Hope you continue.

It's 5 o'clock in the morning. I have been up all night reading this story and I want more. You have an unbelievable talent in writing. I love this story and hope you update really soon. I just want Bella and Embry to get together fully already. UPDATE SOON!