Reviews for Failed Objective
moosejuice5 chapter 1 . 8/15/2016
Kinda sad but I loved it
Guest chapter 1 . 6/17/2015
You really are amazing at these. Nailed the characterization, as always. Thanks for writing!
atsik101 chapter 1 . 4/13/2013
What happened is that they fall in love, John and Cortana!
Electromotive Force chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
I've not come across a short story of yours that I haven't enjoyed. Keep doing it!

-EmF
scaryrobots chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
I love this.
Leonard Church814 chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
R.I.P Cortana 2549-2556/7
Osage chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
Just when I think I'm ready to replay the Campaign for a second attempt, I read stories like this that rip the wound wide open. It's heartbreaking! I've never played a Halo game where I didn't automatically jump back in right after the closing credits, but I just can't do it this time and it's simply because I imagine John in the state you describe here, guilty, hopeless and trying to keep it together despite giving it his all. Then there's the actual void you feel when she's gone and...I dunno. Is there rehab for Halo addicts?
Mr. Iowa chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
Wow, awesome stuff. I hope we get a meeting between Halsey and Chief in Spartan Ops, but I doubt they'll ever do it.
rackushun chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
Shut the **** up guest if u don't like it don't read it. Now about the story I like it although I notice some missing words here and there which brings me to question whether your feeling ok or not don't take it the wrong way I'm just saying that because u might be overworking ur self, anyway great work love it
SlimP chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
I've said it before and I'll say it again...excellent job. Definitely pulled some heart strings reading this. Looking forward for more!
Legionking91 chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
Ignore the guest. 3 I love your JohnxCortana shorts. I have read all of them and I have loved every single one of them. You proved to me that there can be love between a machine and Human 3
alexisg200 chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
Hey Guest shut the fuck up please
Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
Could you just please stop writing chief/cortana pairing story . I fond this pairing disgusting as she just is a computerprogramme. Oter tvang that you writie really good storeys ".