I enjoyed the way you described sex scene. I tried once to write a sex scene too, but it didn't even seem like a sex scene but... anyway. You know writer troubles heheh…

Today is February 2nd 2019 and I have to say that 7 years after you left you still miss to people who used to read your stories.. I mean it is logical that you left, because you grew up. But I want you to know that I really wish to reach your level one day, because I'm a fanfiction writer as well and sometimes I feel that my stories would not be ever interesting to people in my age.. Everyone wants love stories and stuff like that. But your stories especially "in a heartbeat" and "leaps and pounds" made me think that you're a very talented person, so... My stories compred to yours, I ented up your stories are MUCH better!

Anyway, I hope everything goes well for you. I was about to say that I hope one day you will answer me but I guess this day will never come.. Greetings to everyone you love! ;)

Amanda,15 years old, Greece

Amazing!

I love the way you wrote this!

Leaps and bounds was a major part of mr growing up,and being gifted with this will always leave a special place on my heart,thankyou

meme

Damn! Silver is more hands on now. I love how their relationship had developed over the years. So cute!

Awhh!
These two are so adorably awkward together!
I love them c':

Glad to read that they finally got somewhere! Haha

-Amethyst-RoseBlood (sadly, can't log in)

Seriously love this! I'm going to say what I think everyone else said: it's so realistic for a first time and very in character! Love it!

FINALLY! Something in character. That was so not OOC you made me very happy friend
Yes bless you for the beautiful realistic in character smut

This, uh... wasn't quite the kind of sequel I was thinking about even though it fits those two perfectly with the way you've built them up. A large golden star sticker to you for depicting the sex realistically and with all the awkwardness of fumbling first-timers! _ And an extra sticker for including the condom! Far too many forget it, or think saliva can substitute proper lube.

And even though it managed to get hot at the end maybe they should've started experimenting with non-penetrative sex first? Penetration isn't all that counts y'know. Loved the detail that Gold had to be finished with a handjob, it reminded me of some of my own experiences... I'm just glad Silver won't take it as a failure like I did, adding to the insecurities.

Anyhoo, uh... nice job all things considered!

Such realistic.
Very sex.
Much love.
Wow

Oh, man, I can't believe I just read that all in one go! XD

Gold and Silver are so awkward, it's adorable.

"You're like, final boss here, and I'm just a level five mage." - HAHAHA!

Sex doesn't always have to be sexy they said. Why don't you pound Silver they said. *Manly ass scream* WHYYYYYYYYYY-
-Silver

o_o" I think he's trying to say he loved this fic.
-Gold

This has to be the best Pokemon fanfiction I read thus far

I'm so glad to see that Silver and Gold are doing alright! I was thrilled when I saw you wrote another preciousmetal fic because Leaps and Bounds kinda sorta changed my life in a tiny way. Thank you so much for writing such awesome characters and fics.