Reviews for Unfair Justice
YukinaBlueRose chapter 15 . 7/31
I LOVED this story! OXD
PLEASE don't abandon this story!
(I hope you're okay.)
YukinaBlueRose chapter 14 . 7/31
Either Youngblood or the Fenton Parents searching through the zone?
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Danny's ghost friends searching for him?
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Danny's gravestone from where he was declared dead? (Or someone died because Danny/Phantom wasn't around to save them.)
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The Fenton lab. (Also possible that it's Vlad's lab, but I think it's the Fenton's.)
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Tucker? (Maybe, but the next one makes me not sure.)
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If this one had said 'girl', then I would have guessed Jazz (maybe Sam), but since it says boy, this one could also be Tucker. So, not sure here.
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Either Sam or Jazz?
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Maybe Vlad?
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Those are my guesses. O:)
YukinaBlueRose chapter 3 . 7/30
Clockwork.
Mobster Wife chapter 16 . 4/15
Even if you don't continue, I really really enjoyed reading this! The scene where they all go through his memories of why he wants to live...man I had to stop reading to keep myself from crying. The scene where Connor and M'gann are waiting in silence for J'ohn to leave? The silent communication and trust between the team during said time? Beautiful. I read it over like 5 times. The scene where Fenton ties the cape over Phantom before fading? *cheffs kiss* gorgeous. Seriously, one of the most well-written fics I've read!
Craftinoir chapter 1 . 4/13
Take your time! Stories of this caliber are hard to come by! I mean update ASAP, but take your time. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Travo chapter 16 . 7/23/2019
Hope you get better soon dawg
Jabberdom chapter 16 . 7/7/2019
health takes precedence over a fic... A really goooodd one. take care and come back later.
Descendant of Flaming Dragons chapter 1 . 5/23/2019
oh, and mister MindForgedMan? if you think the story is stupid, just dont read it. no need to be rude and dump your bullshitty attitude on others.
Descendant of Flaming Dragons chapter 16 . 4/30/2019
I hope you feel better soon! I'm immersed with your story 'Unfair Justice' and it pains me to hear you can't write at the moment... you're in my prayers! get better soon!
MindForgedMan chapter 6 . 1/11/2019
This story is officially stupid. Dropped and good riddance, sheesh.
MindForgedMan chapter 5 . 1/11/2019
No longer interesting. He's mute, seems to have amnesia... Like is this even Danny Phantom at this point? Youve overdone everything causing it to lose interest.
MindForgedMan chapter 2 . 1/10/2019
So whoever captured Danny went to the stupid trouble of scarring all his skin... come on, don't you see how dumb that sounds?
Asilla chapter 16 . 12/2/2018
Great story Daruku Janubu! I see that it's been many years since you updated it. I hope by now your hand is feeling better!
Even though this is probably abandoned, I'm going to hope it's not completely. I'm following your story and I'll be hoping for an update.
Cheers!
ShadowMyst09 chapter 16 . 11/4/2018
I really loved this story, you wrote it so well.
I hope you someday decide to come back to it.
Eoin Twomey chapter 16 . 10/8/2018
I really want to know how Danny will react with the team so could you please revive the story it is really good and I genually want to read more thank you.
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