Reviews for Unfair Justice |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVED this story! OXD PLEASE don't abandon this story! (I hope you're okay.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Either Youngblood or the Fenton Parents searching through the zone? ... Danny's ghost friends searching for him? ... Danny's gravestone from where he was declared dead? (Or someone died because Danny/Phantom wasn't around to save them.) ... The Fenton lab. (Also possible that it's Vlad's lab, but I think it's the Fenton's.) ... Tucker? (Maybe, but the next one makes me not sure.) ... If this one had said 'girl', then I would have guessed Jazz (maybe Sam), but since it says boy, this one could also be Tucker. So, not sure here. ... Either Sam or Jazz? ... Maybe Vlad? ... Those are my guesses. O:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Clockwork. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even if you don't continue, I really really enjoyed reading this! The scene where they all go through his memories of why he wants to live...man I had to stop reading to keep myself from crying. The scene where Connor and M'gann are waiting in silence for J'ohn to leave? The silent communication and trust between the team during said time? Beautiful. I read it over like 5 times. The scene where Fenton ties the cape over Phantom before fading? *cheffs kiss* gorgeous. Seriously, one of the most well-written fics I've read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Take your time! Stories of this caliber are hard to come by! I mean update ASAP, but take your time. Can’t wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope you get better soon dawg |
![]() ![]() ![]() health takes precedence over a fic... A really goooodd one. take care and come back later. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh, and mister MindForgedMan? if you think the story is stupid, just dont read it. no need to be rude and dump your bullshitty attitude on others. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you feel better soon! I'm immersed with your story 'Unfair Justice' and it pains me to hear you can't write at the moment... you're in my prayers! get better soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is officially stupid. Dropped and good riddance, sheesh. |
![]() ![]() ![]() No longer interesting. He's mute, seems to have amnesia... Like is this even Danny Phantom at this point? Youve overdone everything causing it to lose interest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So whoever captured Danny went to the stupid trouble of scarring all his skin... come on, don't you see how dumb that sounds? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story Daruku Janubu! I see that it's been many years since you updated it. I hope by now your hand is feeling better! Even though this is probably abandoned, I'm going to hope it's not completely. I'm following your story and I'll be hoping for an update. Cheers! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really loved this story, you wrote it so well. I hope you someday decide to come back to it. |
![]() ![]() I really want to know how Danny will react with the team so could you please revive the story it is really good and I genually want to read more thank you. |