I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

Bunny: jack wtf. Jack: omg I would never do that. Both: but still thankyou

pitch & jack kinda reminds me of bill cipher & dipper from gravity falls

can the new guy run up to jack and say "jack I found you"! "are you okay"? "who-where am I"? "jack... why's your hair white"...-faints-

and the new guy is jacks friend who tried to save him before when he fell in the lake, but died trying... he doesn't like jack that way, but when pitch is being mean he pretends(with jack knowing) that he likes jack that way to help him because of love. oh and the new guy is cupid! you don't have to do this, this is just something I'd like to see that's all, but really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really loved your story!

;-; so... does that mean -sniffle- no more black frost?

not to be mean, but i am expecting to see more of this pls! but jack more into it and maybe riding...

This story was completely wonderful! All of it! I loved the ending, Not a chance! Ha ha, laughed so hard at that part!

amazing story can't wait to see what happens next

"He's returned Jack."
oh shit. this could end badly... good luck jack!

I don't really like how jack is replaced I liked number three better, just my honest opinion. ;)

i like the 3rd option the most, though, pitch should keep a healthy amount of darkness with him ;)

I love it! It makes me horny a lot and hope you can keep writing that story forever.

what if pitch gets a liking to jack and he cant stop thinking about him so when the guardians rise and pitch gets beaten up because fo his desiers for jack and u can make up the rest beacuse thats all i have

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