I liked this POV and the description of the characters!

Poor Greg!

i love this :) great job!

oops...that last review was from me! :o)

Oh, I enjoyed reading this very much! :o)

This was SO perfect. I really enjoyed this! Your writing was so good, I felt like you captured the characters brilliantly. I almost felt sorry for Greg but I loved how you wrote Nick even more. Real sweet. Hope you write more New Girl fanfiction, you made my shipper heart very happy :-)

Welcome to the new girl fandom! Loved this story, very well considered and beautifully constructed with good pacing and characterisation! Keep it up, we need all the authors we can get :-)

that was awesome! really nice to read it from a new point of view, and it was so...i can't think of the word...un-obvious! but in such a good way. really different, if you know what i mean. L-O-V-E-D it!

You're really good. I loved this short ficlet. Jess's Chrismas present for Nick, the knitted zombie, made me a little teary-eyed. That's so true to their characters. I hope you write more NG fics.

Absolutely perfect. Hope this is the first of many!

I find it hard to believe this is your first new girl fic - you have the characterisation completely spot on! I enjoyed this so much. It made me grin like a fool. You write so marvellously. I loved that we got to see the gang from someone new's point of view, it made for such an interesting read. I hope you decide to write more for this fandom!

This is amazing! Loved how you wrote the gang through this guy's POV - so spot on. The characterizations were perfect & the whole thing was adorable. All the love interests in the show eventually come to see the Nick/Jess connection - they don't stand a chance. ;)

this was absolutely lovely! you write incredibly well and i am SO looking forward to more stories from you! please keep writing for our lovely ship (lord knows the shows not giving us enough these days!"

my favorite part: "We bought a birthday present for Nick's Mom," Jess told him when he asked her about her day. There was a strange sinking feeling in his chest, because she hadn't said "Nick and I" or "I went with Nick", she'd said "We", like it was natural. Like she and Nick were part of a "We" that everyone knew about.

so lovely :)

keep writing! please! pretty please!

I can't even begin to describe how much I loved this. This was just perfect. Wonderful, wonderful job. Poor Greg, it's funny (and says a lot about your writing) how you do feel bad for him while secretly smiling and cheering Nick and Jess along.

Among other things, of course this had to be my favorite line...

*She introduced him as her roommate. They didn't hold hands, or kiss, or call each other honey, but they both seemed more alive.*-big grin on this gal's face.

Your writing is so very good, this story as I stated before is perfect! I love the fics that kinda show through Nick and Jess' everyday encounters and interactions how amazing and sweet and unique their relationship is. So with that being said, please do all of us Nick and Jess fans a favor and write another one soon :)

Thanks for sharing!

That was fantastic! I mean on the one hand i was like feeling really sorry for poor Greg(which is a biiiig success of yours, cause normally I hat every guy at her side who isn't Nick;)) but on the other hand I was like grinning the whole time cause Nick was so sweet to her. Luv the the story:)