That was sad. I still think there should have been more.

Give me my Sarumi!

This is so sad. WAAA! I wish Misaki would just accept Saru's confession and would also confess to Saru

/feels everywhere. and i thought they can finally be back together... /weep

saaaaddd
but awesome :D

Amazing.

I really liked this story. I felt that it has a lot of emotional impact and very well written. Sure there are a few typos but that's irreverent to me due to the overall quality of the story. Thank-you very much for sharing!

This was so good! You should continue this story, it has a lot of potential!

i honestly feel sorry for fushimi here x.x

I love it. Very emotional and it got me to think about it very hard. I can totally relate to your way of thinking when writting sad stories. This one especially. The fact that their relationship is doomed and that they can never be together stays the same. You have inspired me to write a story on these two now, and i cant since its late at night. Your story was perfect, the feelings of angst, saddness, love, lust, disapointment and confusion were clearly sent to the reader. Please continue creating with unique mind.

So let me say.. I thought this was going to be another FF where it is just sex (and I was about to push the back button), but you surprised me! The ending was superb! I adore this FF!
The short story was wonderful :3

It's so sad
I almost crying when I listened to their trading CD...
I hope that they'll be together again in the end of the story...

Nice story! w

I liked it but I can't help but notice the typos and such. It's pretty good for a first try so just keep on writing and I hope to read more for you. :)