not bad could use more action.

I love your beautiful imagery.
Hmm...I wonder why they kept running into dead ends? How could Byakuya possibly need two hits to kill a relatively defenseless, completely powerless human? Ah, friendship, that which crosses boundaries and splits loyalties like nothing else... except, perhaps, fear.

I really like it. I can't really describe why or anything, but it just hits the right spot in my heart.

Lovely

Awwww that was so good I loved it bat story yet!

Oh my gosh this was so cute. It's not rushed or anything like some stories but gentle like two puzzle pieces that found they're mach.