Reviews for The Strong Bond |
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StefonRichardson chapter 7 . 7/1 Please keep making chapters |
Guest chapter 7 . 8/15/2019 Keep it up your doing well in advance of story |
XxSonGokuFGxX chapter 6 . 7/29/2019 i couldnt see goku in action alot more so im a little dissapointed... hes not some coward and is totally a dumbass lmao.. aside from that the story was lit |
GokuSSB chapter 7 . 2/16/2016 The story was too enjoyable and we all want you to continue this. Request your beta reader to edit the rewritten version |
Random Guy chapter 1 . 7/15/2015 Well at least goku is not THAT op lol |
GoSage44 chapter 7 . 6/17/2015 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO IT WAS JUST GETTING GOOD |
teetertotter23 chapter 7 . 10/14/2014 Hopefully you update this one soon :) |
teetertotter23 chapter 1 . 10/14/2014 I like the direction of where the story is headed. You may need a beta to help with a few grammatical errors as sometimes sentences didn't make sense. Great start though :) |
ninja master reborn chapter 2 . 2/23/2014 it is called a biju not jinchurki |
Anime100 chapter 6 . 10/3/2013 This is truly interesting and fantastic to read; please update soon |
Markus-Antonius chapter 6 . 2/26/2013 Is there gonna be any pairings or is it just gonna follow canon? |
ImagineBreaker7 chapter 5 . 2/17/2013 This is a great story I love it. I usually don't like crossovers that involve more then two universes but you were able to make it great. I only have one minor complaint and it's not too major. It looks like you are hinting to a Naruto Orihime pairing. I like Orihime I do but I don't think her character and personality suit Naruto. I think there are Other characters that would suit Naruto as a pairing instead of her. For example Yoruichi seems to have a similar and interests to Naruto which would help them connect well. I also believe that Naruto would do really well with Soi Fon. Well these are my personal opinions and although I would prefer if you changed the pairing that doesn't mean I won't like the story if you keep the story the same. I really like this story and my dislike for Naruto's pairing is not a major issue. I look forward to your next update. |
Lightningblade49 chapter 2 . 2/8/2013 Sensing reiatsu an Energy Naruto doesn't use to Judge Strength is Idiotic. |
Lightningblade49 chapter 1 . 2/8/2013 When these four are group together it's weird seeing Goku not the strongest of the four but that's not a bad thing. |
Markus-Antonius chapter 5 . 2/1/2013 Ok if I were naruto, uryu would have gotten a fist to the mouth the moment he said I did this. |