Very interesting!
I really like this and hope that you'll continue it.

Please write the next chapter soon, it's super sonically foursome awesome

:D
Runo has green eyes, I think. But can't wait!

So lovely! I love the atmosphere and pace.
How often are you going to post the new chapters?
I really love this and I'm so excited!
Spotted a few grammar errors but they didn't throw the reader off, so great job.
Looking forward to the next chapters (of all your stories I might add (~o)~ ).

OMG OMG! You're rewriting the story! Yes! And yes, I have read the first book of Lunar chronicles. I'm trying to get the second one right now.

Anyways, amazing chapter, no doubt about that. And ohhh... looks like things are getting bigger in the first chapter itself. And nice, Runo having the most 'captivating blue eyes'.

Honestly, I don't know what is her eye color exactly. Some say blue, some say green, some say aquamarine, another says something else. But oh well, doesn't matter!

Hope you update soon! I'm looking forward to the next chapter

Great story dude I love the adventure that happen am sorry I hv changed my name to the pyrus warrior

WHY DID YOU STEAL THE NAME OF THE HOURSE FROM LEDGEND OF ZELDA!

Me like PWEASE write more!

Update soon love this story

Love this story alot, keep it up, and plz update soon :D

This is ment for chapter 5 but anyway. Please update soon

I finally get why the chapter's called unexpected help. I mean I really didn't expect Spectra of all people to be the one to bail Runo out!

Which makes me wonder though... What he meant by referring to Runo as queen.

I really hope Alice survived that one as it would suck to have her die.

UPDATE SOON!

It's been way too long since I've read any Fanfics in Baku Fandom so I decided go start with the ones I've already followed, reviewed on.

Won't talk about grammar as we all have those minor mishaps and nothing bad seems to stand out so It's all good.

I was worried for Runo at the beginning, especially after Spectra came into the equation. To think that they were that close to wanting to beat the life out of her, I guess we can all be thankful for Alice's cool head.

When I think about it, that was actually smart on Alice's part to have Hydron hurry it up the way they did. Definitely can't wait to see how this plays out in the next chapter.

*sweatdrop*, Did I really sound that bad? *Whew*, Am I glad I put up that this is not a flame sign when I had the chance.

Anyways! Onto Chapter 5

Love your work. Keep it up. Just keep writing. Just keep writing. What do we do we write, write, write.

Wow, that was good, and Dan's back, YAA! But, I'm still pissed it took this long for you to update -_- anyways, now that schools out, please get something up! Oh, and for all your other stories too!