Interesting chapter and plot and idea

So I finished this story and as you can see, I took my time to throughoutly read this story. I have to say that I'm quite satisfied with this ending, and how everything came together.
One thing that got my attention was the very detailed writing as well as continuation of the plot. I liked how you went in detail to show every Villains perspective, and not just focus on our beloved hero. Of course, sometimes that quality of detail became some what of a drag (especially with Mysterio and also with the N.Y. Takeover arc) and slowed the pacing of the fanfiction down. That of course, is not an objective view but more my personal taste in writing. One important aspect to mention are the characters. Peter is potraid as he should be (I mean if a writer can't even do that, then what the hell is s/he even writing?), and your interesting take on Black cat origin was refreshing. But if there is one that stole the show, it definitely was Norman Osborn. Man I was always at the edge of my seat when he came on. Will he become the GG? What is he planing? What are his goals? And the trauma that Peter always has when he sees the GG just underlines that terrifying Aura for the reader...poor Peter I could feel with him on that one. Also I loved the Chameleon in this one, especially his character development, thought process and his conversations with Norman Osborn!
Oh and one last thing: I always wanted to see someone use the idea, that Black cat could earn loads of money, by simply breaking in to various places and test their security. It would give her the rush that she is missing as a hero, and it's a badass way of earning your cash. Finally someone did use this fucking idea!
Anyway, I really enjoyed that you didn't force some kind of relationship on Felicia and Peter (even tho I'm a hard-core sucker for that ship). It wouldn't fit to both of them as it stands right now but this Hero trio was a good idea. But who knows maybe in a possible sequel... Furthermore, I loved it that you held onto the friendship of Peter and Harry.

Now, I'm tired of making this review
Take care,
have good inspiration.

Yours dearly,
~kaffeenator

P.s I'm sorry for grammar and misspelling mistakes, I wrote this on my phone

So normally I tend to catch completely up with a story before commenting about it. I want to regard it in its entirety, and not just from part to part. That is after all the reason why a story has multiple chapters/ parts. But you get a special treatment...and that because of mysterio. By the love of God, HOW long do you plan to make the mysterio chapters? I can't fucking see him anymore! Jesus Christ I can't wait when we finally move on...so God damn long...I was interested in him but now I only want him to never ever see him in this fan fic...please can we just move on.
Anyway sorry for this little...rant...of mine. I didn't mean to say that this fic is bad or anything, I just can't see him anymore

I read this story a few years ago when the last 30 chapters or so were being written, and I must say that this is the best Spider-Man fan fiction I've ever read and one of my personal favorite Spider-Man adaptations. I hope that this story is continued one day, but in the meantime, thanks for this one.

Good good

Good

Good great

Good

lol. love the camio

Webs don’t have DNA and definitely not human. Also, it is spelled Spider-Man. I’m glad this fic made it to its ending and is nice and long. Oh and, yes, actually, Spider-Man was the first other than Captain America who was a supersoldier and not yet returned by the time Spider-Man started superheroing. In fact some people who became Avengers or members of other hero groups were inspired to become superheroes by Spider-Man.

It is part of why Peter is so highly respected among superhero fans. He was someone who, in any other comic, would have been a sidekick but there were no superheroes. No role models for the job. No training, no guidance or advice and barely any resources. Yet, he went out and learned the hard way with unyielding determination no matter how badly he was hurt gaining experience.

Spider-Man sticks by manipulating the relationships between electrons in the comics. Yeah, pretty crazy. It’s used to explain why he can stick even through sneakers and boots and heavy gloves. His threads are only sticky on one end, most likely due to its sheer speed upon being launched getting it to the target before it can harden enough to matter.

I sometimes have wondered if the electon sticking method is how Peter doesn’t get stuck even in webbing we see is clearly sticking anything that touches it. Like maybe he does it in reverse so instead or sticking he becomes “non-sticky” or something. Would thst help him escape the grip of people? Could he master that to slip out of any bonds simply by repelling them away at a sub-atomic level?

Jorkier was beyond interested in the story so far. She was a tad concerned when she noticed some word for word dialogue at the beginning, but now she knew for sure it wouldnt be an exact copy after readying the entire chapter. It was mysterious and she was absolutely loving it, also now taking the chance to wonder why she was thinking up a paragraph instead of just saying what she thought in a comment. The blonde reached the end of the page and gasped, "213 pages?! Oh hell yeah!"
Then was promptly smacked over the head by a phantom Steve Rodgers. "Language."

Look, it's a review. If you've seen the reviews for other stories that lack a good summary you know the important details. Even if you haven't you probably already know about how a good summary draws readers in. If you want to know what's different about this review then go check out www dot notarealwebsite dot com. I'd tell you, but you hate spoilers, so check it out, and enjoy.

I hate being right. On a positive note, it was well written... Ghost!

Since Peter did not help J.J. And the mugger turned out to be the very man that is going to rob the bank, I feel safe to assume, Uncle Ben will play the ultimate price. I will assume he dies. Thus Peter will learn the meaning behind the words, "With great power, comes great responsibility." If this does happen in this way, you have put an interesting twist to his creation and molded it to make it your own. I will find out directly. Either way I am loving this story's.