Reviews for Black Phoenix Witches
Guest chapter 37 . 6/14
I’ve enjoyed your story very much. Thank you for sharing it.
what a lovely way to burn chapter 37 . 1/6
i’ve been looking for this fic for so long! i’m so glad i found it :D i love this story as much as i did the first time i read it, two years ago. good writing, amazing plot — i look forward to coming back eventually to reread yet again.
Isahh chapter 37 . 7/22/2019
I loved how badass the Black Phoenix Witches were portrayed! Loved how you developed Severus and Hermione's relationship. Loved how realistically they overcame the obstacles along the way. I cried and mourned for Cho and Marlene. Loved how you change the focus from Harry and Ron to our favourite witches. Great plot! Loved the references, the quotes, the equally badass and legendary witches, the phoenixesand the scene where they watched 'wizardkind', that was one my favourite ones. Loved how you detailed Mione and Sev's lovemaking. Loved Black Phoenix Witches!
jlove34 chapter 37 . 11/3/2018
Lovely is my second or third read. I’d always wished that in the final chapter that Hermione had been able to return home, see her family and twin again. But such is life, I’m afraid. Thanks for sharing.
robituputup chapter 37 . 2/9/2018
You had an absolutely brilliant idea. I loved your Hermione and Severus and other main characters. While well written, in my humble opinion, your fic occasionally lacked short (usually) scenes - it might be because I'm ill at the time of reading it, but sometimes I had to stop for a moment to figute out what and how happened, and like with the part where Severus stayed at Leaky, I was dying out of curiosity ;) Loved the fragment with Hermione and the dragon.
Thank you for the amazing reading piece!
RemisGrl chapter 37 . 11/18/2017
This was a pretty interesting, awkward yet very good story. Loved it and the AU it came from, some stuff confused me but I think I figured most of it out lol. Thank you!
galaxies in her eyes chapter 37 . 10/26/2017
Yay! I really loved this plot, and I can't understand how you don't have many, many more reviews. I enjoy stories with Hermione as a strong female character, and I liked the way she told everyone. Great writing!
Dontgotaclue88 chapter 37 . 8/15/2017
Loved it! Thank you for sharing
Alex Aces chapter 20 . 8/10/2017
-_- how does Snape not know witches exist? McGonagall. Pomfrey. Pomona. There are four witches undercover just in Hermione's year.
Alex Aces chapter 5 . 8/10/2017
It is a bit strange to hear 11 year olds referred to as "men" and "real men". Girls are often a bit taller than boys at that age because they reach puberty earlier.
Lulu chapter 16 . 3/14/2017
The action scene in the Shack is a bit rushed, but great chappie!
Beloved Daughter chapter 37 . 1/25/2017
Brilliant story and brilliantly written. I thoroughly enjoyed reading from start to finish. Thanks for writing and posting.
MoonlitSnowFox chapter 6 . 11/14/2016
An ally? I hope so.
MoonlitSnowFox chapter 3 . 11/14/2016
An amazing start to a story. This chapter was delightful. Bravery in the face of oppression from an 11 year old. Just delightful!
BlahKing chapter 30 . 9/7/2016
I find the 'romance' between her and Snape to be unnecessary. It lacks development and adds little to the overall story. Powerful young witch hidden in a world she is not allowed entry into somehow falls in love with a professor whom she has spoken maybe 20 direct words to. You could switch out Snape with anyone and reach the same result. That is how little he is being characterized.
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