Damn this is sick! I like it!

omfg more please this was so sad

Wow, this was really beautiful.
I always shipped them, they had so much potential. Thank you very much for manifesting that potential into this masterpiece of a fanfiction. It was everything I ever hoped/dreamed for and even more. Sadly I don't have a way with words, or I could praise you the way you deserve, because the plot, the writing style, the words you used... just wow. My favourite sentence would be: "Trust me. I'll see you in another life. I'll search for you."
The promise of waiting, finding and something more between them is so heart-warming. I wished the anime had shown us a little more interacting between these two, preferable this. I know, this is way too much romance for HxH, but I can't help it. I'm a sucker for well-written bitter-sweet love, because let's be honest, even if this ship were canon, it wouldn't have ended well... sadly T_T
So thank you very much for writing this and sharing it with all of us. It is really one of the best fanfiction I ever read, maybe even the best.

Mini

ah what a sad ending, I was kinda hoping it would lead somewhere else. Still, good job on this. This is about the only good Neferpitou fan fic I had the pleasure of reading.

Wow I can't believe it's been 2 years since I've found this fic and I'm still crying at the ending, wow me. Amazing work dear! 11/10 would recommend.

Wao

It was a really good story i like how kaito and neferpitou show their love

Absolutely fascinating...ok then, now i ship it.

Muito bom mesmo melhor fanfic que já lê de hunter x hunter.

Hey, you. How could you write a story as gorgeous as this?
Pitokai became my new fav couple after their scene in the anime (finally, after following HxH for a couple of years with NO ship at all. And yes, I was kinda late watching this arc), and I'm so glad to find this piece of art. I really really love how you wrote their characters; they seemed so in character. The romance was unforced and believable; I could imagine that Togashi could really wrote their story like this if he were willing to add a little romance spice in this gruesome arc. If this happened, maybe Gon would not kill Pitou :[
Great work!

!...This still my favorite fiction and the greatest hxh fiction ever! This ending is so much better! I absolutely love parts that you added (the shaipouf part) and everything. I love it before. And i love it even more now. Thanks you very much for writing this fiction

Hi, i really really liked this fiction when it was first published. This is the first hxh fiction i ever read (because it's the only kitexpitou fiction at that time) this fiction existed before neferpitou / kite tag appears on filter search! Lol lol.

what i'm about to say is...
it left such a great impression on me that i reread it a few weeks ago and decided to review it again. And i'd say that this is still my favourite fiction

!Greatest hunter x hunter fiction i ever read!

it's perfectly fit with everything. Pitou and kaito perfectly in character, the dance, everything! love it! !

And i think that this ending is much better than the previous. Great job!

this story is cool

So very tragic and yet so very magnificent. I know I'm too late in mentionig this but thank you for making this. It's just a shame he died at the end when I thought they could have spent more time together. Oh well..